Allure

I think this is perfect the way it is but if you really want a critique then try maybe a very subtle wave or small fish, some "life" to the water. I see "life" everywhere else, I personally would like to see it as well in the water. I guess that just depends if you want to change the meaning of this work because right now I see quiet peacefulness but if you add those things then it might become loud and violent <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> I guess maybe that's what you maybe need.. some dramatic weather or maybe other elements like fire or maybe even a more subtle yet dramatic like an exaggerated reflection like maybe the aftermath of violent weather in the reflection. Maybe the reflection should do what a reflection does which is reflect. By that I mean, show what our actions to nature have resulted in or just something dramatic like that. I guess what I am trying to say is that it needs drama. Now I don't like drama in my life but in art, I think that's where you can express it to teach people something. Try teaching something to somebody with this through drama. I hope this "critique" helps <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>