ahn, just try out the whole piece once, make everything faster you can but not forget to draw the details as better you can either. afterward you just polish it to get a better final visual. the most important tip is make it fast.
i promise that i'm not just fave and running because i think it's fun. dA has decided that i'm spamming (i might be a little, but not in a jerk kind of way, in a i-was-gone-forever-and-i-was-trying-not-to-fave-and-run kind of way...) anyhow, i like your work (that's why i watch you) and i've just come back after a long time neglecting this account. i hope you understand, and i hope to be back around to leave real comments on your work