Well, this story is definitely a bit of different, darker take on the "What happens after TLK 2" theme, and I really like it so far. That the comments got drastically more and more from page to page is imho also a good sign that you hit a fandom nerve-! At the beginning you stated that this story was supposed to be only ca. 10 pages long? But I guess thanks to the success you might tell a longer tale now. I am very interested and will follow where this might lead!
Thank you! It makes me glad to hear that you and so many others enjoy my stories even if they are a little different. Especially since I like to come up with fan stories that don't follow the usual routes or cliches.
True, the story was scripted to be only around 10 pages long from the start. Now it will be around 18, which is way more than I planed. But the only reason it got longer was because I underestimated how many panels I could include in a page . The comic itself will still not cover more than it was meant to. However, the story will still continue even after the comic, just not comic form.