I'm sorry but how the hell was this DD'd?
I recommend adding clearer detail in general. The whole things really blurry(LOW HQ), the positioning seems so random along with the lines. The lower opac'd c4d's in the back also look random or maybe they were put there in an attempt to add "depth?". I'd remove the red circles because they look pretty pointless, and the white brush spots along the c4D look like they don't belong. Maybe paint over the c4d to give it richer texture?