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Considering how this is a quick sketch that has been rendered, I am quite impressed. Her head has nice proportions since her face takes...

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I originally saw this from :iconbing-klosby: and :iconterrithesketcher: and figured I would give it a shot.  I have no idea who originally made this, but it was enjoyable.


[ ] They are possessed by an angel

[ ] They are possessed by a demon 

[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie 

[ ] They are physically strong

[ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour 

[X] Their eyes are an unusual colour (I don't know of many people who have yellow eyes)

[ ] This happens to be red 

[ ] Their eyes change colour 

[ ] They have wings 

[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift 

[ ] They are immortal

[ ] (if a female) they have large boobs

[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular

[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender

[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc 

[X] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers (artificial left arm acquired after a "work-related incident")

[X] They have a special ability/power (can override electronics with his prosthetic arm and is a very independent thinker)

[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers 

[ ] They are a healer 

[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family

[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents

[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc. 

[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death 

[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[ ] They never knew their parents 

[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child 

[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender 

[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends

[ ] They are emo/cutesy

[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are

[X] They are currently in a relationship (with Sophie Sarcelle)

[ ] They have a mental disorder

[X] They have an emotional disorder (used to struggle with depression)

[ ] They struggle to stay sane

[ ] They are a psycho 

[ ] They have multiple personalities 

[X] They are very intelligent

[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc. 

[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet 

[ ] They have a guardian spirit

[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul 

[ ] Their soul is not the same as them 

[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts 

[ ] Some part of their body glows 

[ ] They have a rare/unusual name 

[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc. 

[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age

[ ] They are connected with a certain element 

[ ] They are connected with a certain animal 

[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label' 

[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga

[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives 

[ ] They are hiding from someone/something

[ ] They have a rare blood type 

[ ] They cry blood

[ ] Certain noises/situations give them a nervous breakdown 

[ ] They are from a different country to where they live 

[ ] They are very mysterious/dark

[ ] They are very lively/happy 

[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[X] They are very patient 

[ ] They are from a long line of 

[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear 

[ ] They have amnesia 

[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition 

[ ] The have a curse upon them

[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[ ] They are 'the chosen one'

[ ] They have insomnia


Overall points: 7


Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:


[?] They smoke (used to smoke, but now they chew on toothpicks and use nicotine patches)

[ ] They are an alcoholic

[ ] They are overweight 

[ ] They are addicted to drugs

[ ] They have a short temper 

[ ] They enjoy bullying others 

[ ] They do not care much about others 

[ ] They are emotionless


Point Reductions: 0


Final score: 7


RESULT: Alex is a Balanced Character


<5 Anti-Sue

Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^



6-15 Balanced Character

If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.  (Overall, Alex is pleasant and has some special "gifts" but is pretty tame in comparison to my other main character, Sophie.)



16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue

We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.


26 < Mary-Sue

Nothing more to say.

If anyone is interested, feel free to give this a whirl!
  • Listening to: Trevor Something
  • Drinking: vodka

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Vampire-Sacrifice Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Happy Birthday!!!#
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MissInspi Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2015  Student Filmographer
Thanks so much for the watch!! :D
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Lupineleigh Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2015  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Happy birthday!
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Merani Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Happy Birthday! :party:
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Merani Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm super-late and super-sorry: Happy belated Birthday! :hug:
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IndyHorizon Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014
Aww, thank you!  It was a nice relaxed birthday that I got to enjoy with my family. 
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Vampire-Sacrifice Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
DUUUUDE
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
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IndyHorizon Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
Aww, thanks, VS!  :D  I've been having a good one alright
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Yesnoshroom Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
Happy Birthday!!
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IndyHorizon Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
Thank you! :D  I can't believe I'm 24 already.  I was still getting over the fact that I had turned 22 and hadn't even gotten around to grasping 23 ;)  Time sure does seem to fly
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