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Her desk by ilolamai Her desk by ilolamai
It's her desk,not my desk.Repeat,it's her desk.

But please don't ask me why do my works show up on her computer screen.

Program: SAI Paint Tool

Any critique is welcome.

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:icontoonham:
I really enjoy the use of perspective, though I tried imitating that pose and almost hurt my neck. Anyway, the lines leading up to the vanishing point create a good sense of depth with those lovely eyes pulling you in. The details are wonderful as can be seen in the keyboards, the stack of papers in the bottom left, and the girl's hair.

The dolls on the desk and on the shelf seem out of place though. I do not mean that they do not belong in the work, but rather, they do not feel like they fit stylistically in the piece. If they are supposed to be figurines, they come off as paper dolls with the illusion of three dimensions.

Great concept overall and keep up the good work!
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I absolutely love this piece.
The way the hair was drawn is lovely, and the colors suit the picture well. The eyes are very attractive and were also very well-drawn. The wrinkles and shading in the clothes are also excellent. As are the keyboard, computers, chair and desk.

But there are a few minor things I would like to point out;
The head seems to be looking up at an odd angle, and the figurines/dolls seem to be a bit.. Flat.

But besides that this is a great drawing, just like the rest of the drawings in your gallery. Keep up the good work!^^
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:iconmoccabun:
moccabun Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing perspective :) 
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SaariCorporation Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
cute
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:iconmephilesthedark2182:
MephilesTheDark2182 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Hold on just a minute...is that Serif DrawPlus X6 that I see on the desktop monitor???
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:iconcarlasophia:
CarlaSophia Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014   Photographer
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014
Thank you very much.
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:iconmoosefate:
MooseFate Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is sooooo amazing!!!!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014
Thank you very much.
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:iconmoosefate:
MooseFate Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow... this was a very old comment... like almost a year old now
But you're welcome!
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:iconmonica52404:
monica52404 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
cute:)
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
Thank you.
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:iconmonica52404:
monica52404 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
you're welcome
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:iconatrolus:
Atrolus Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Can't go wrong with Mio, Yui, Ritsu and Mugi on your desk!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Yeah!
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:iconmagicofmanga:
MagicofManga Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
hahahahaa her face is so cute :D
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
Heheh.Thanks.
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:iconshrodu:
shrodu Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol. Touhou's Reisen? XD
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012
That book cover,yes.
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:iconshironekitsune:
ShiroNeKitsune Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
kawaii :3
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012
Thanks^^
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:iconpsychozombii:
PsychoZombii Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cute~! LOL, shes using photoshop XD

I really like her eyes and hair. I can see what you tried to do with the dolls. They look like they were transformed/skewed weirdly, like, paper cutouts. Its not a big problem though, just constructive criticism. This is still an OUTSTANDING picture! :iconfav3dplz::iconmonkeythumbplz:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012
Thank you very much.I'm glad that you like it.^^
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:iconpsychozombii:
PsychoZombii Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh, no problem. you're very welcome~! :iconilikeitplz:
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:iconsaucerqueen:
SaucerQueen Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
How cool we both have the same monitor and keyboard! :3
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012
That's great!
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meowmix94 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love everything about this picture except her hand and the figurines on the shelf. Her hand seems a bit too small and pudgy, kind of like the hand of a kid, and the figurines look like paper dolls, zero depth.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012
Thank you very much for your critique.I will try to do better.
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:iconshalia-windterra:
Shalia-windterra Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2011
kudos to you, that right there is my dream desk. . .
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012
Yeah,me too.
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:iconministart:
mInIsTaRt Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011  Student General Artist
me gusta mucho su arte
espero algún día unirme a su grupo
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012
Thank you very much.I hope that too.
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:iconministart:
mInIsTaRt Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012  Student General Artist
XD
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:iconmikachusango:
MikachuSango Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol I forgot to fav it before^^;
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012
Heheh.
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:iconmikachusango:
MikachuSango Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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:iconpotterwatcher1997:
Potterwatcher1997 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Student General Artist
Haha, this is really cool!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
Thank you.
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garciajeffreyv Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011  Professional Filmographer
very nice :clap:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011
Thanks^^
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:iconchurro-kunnn:
CHURRO-kunnn Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
WOW, this is really awesome.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011
Thank you^^
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:iconthekm1994:
thekm1994 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011
WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011
^__^
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:iconthe-dragonzilla:
The-DragonZilla Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011
Cool O.O
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011
Thanks^^
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:iconm-ri:
M-ri Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
:heart:!!!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011
^__^
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:iconsplenda-idlife:
Splenda-idLife Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i love the perspective and flow of hair! do u use a tablet?
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011
I'm glad that you love it.
Yes,i use tablet.
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:iconaeonslover:
aeonslover Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011
Keion~:heart:
LOL cute *w*
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011
Yeah!

Thanks^^
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