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I wanna show this before loading the models to the 3d rendering oven (Hypershot). Any suggestions for improvement are greatly appreciated :D

Edit: Changed the camera angle, raised the Demolition howitzer's height and adjusted Belial's position.

For comparison, you can view the old versions here: [link] and here: [link]

Full Metal Panic (c) Souji Gatoh, Shikidouji, Kadokawa
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otaking3582 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Badass!
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mech-maniac Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2010
wow that's great
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TwV Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009
Very nice!

To make it more dynamic though, I suggest having the Laevatein hunch/kneel down a bit, facing slightly up towards the Belial.
Perhaps pointing the howitzer more towards the screen, reducing it's profile may help as well.
Just my thoughts.

Looking forward to the final rendered piece. :)
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Illsteir Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2009
I tried the kneeling position, I didn't like it . But I did point the howitzer towards the screen and it now looks better.
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Kuriko-Kaze Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009
Just out of curiosity, Did you use the Concept images for the ARX-8, or its Revoltech as a base?
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Illsteir Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009
I used the early linearts and the scan from Dragon Magazine of the ARX-8. When the Revoltech figure came out I used it as reference to correct the colors of the back parts and the hair (the model's initial hair color was yellow and not bluish silver like the in revoltech figure).
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Seig-Warheit Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
is this a fanarts?
uhh... maybe the cannon are a bit too long...
i think...
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Illsteir Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009
The Demolition Howitzer is really that long :D
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Awar01 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009
As always I love it, keep up the great work!
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bluedragonflame Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009
Need an epic background of course.
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nahumreigh Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009  Professional General Artist
coool
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TurinuZ Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think it could use a bit more dramatic angling (The poses seem fine enough; the angle of the models just seems "flat" to me, though.), but otherwise great work.
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Illsteir Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009
Lowered the angle now. What do you think?
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Troopermanaic Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't like the fact that you cannot see the weapon on the left hand but that may be for dramatic affect. Other then that its fine.
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Illsteir Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009
I'll adjust the Belial's position to expose the blade a bit.
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