After thinking about it a bit more, I've decided on a new idea altogether, since I can't seem to be able to describe the sports scene in a way that would satisfy you:
A semi-NSFW (but not explicit) BDSM pic where Dash has the mind controlled Twilight strapped to a table with a crop in her hooves.
Twilight would also have a gag in her mouth, but have a glazed look in her eye.
Dash would be wearing a necklace, which would be the artifact she's using to control her friend and, while she'd mostly be behind the camera, there'd still be a smirk on her face as she gets ready to use the crop.
I think that's interesting enough
Okay, question. Why didn't you choose the moment in time when they started the process / in the process?
Okay, I've given it a bit more thought on that whole Dash and mind controlled Twilight thing.
To indicate that Twilight is under Dash's control, rather than wear all that Rainbow Dash themed gear, her eyes would be rainbow rings, and there'd be a rainbow dash themed pocket watch nearby on the ground that Dash had used.
And there'd be dialogue where Dash mentions something like, "I knew springing for that watch would get you to be more like me" or something like that, since Twi would probably prefer reading about sports than actually playing them.
I still don't see what they are doing. It sounds like you told me, "draw me Sport-game-thing and put them on clothes." The latest changes somehow point to Dash, but don't speak directly. These two ponies do nothing to indicate submission (unless they throw fragile things around the field and wear things that interfere with playing football). Usually people use collars, leashes, whips, all kinds of toys. They don't stand in the middle of the field and play ball with each other. Or if you don't want toys, then this is something the script should help, not just one picture. For instance. If Dash had hit the ball in Twilight's face in front of a couple of other friends and scored a goal with a recache; friends are shocked by the event; and Twilight suddenly said with genuine joy, "Nice shot Dash!" and hugged her instead of yelling at Dash, then your idea would have worked. But you just want to put on two boring poses and put on a couple of useless accessories and somehow it will work.
Well I'm trying to fill in the details for a "Dash has mind controlled Twilight into playing a sport" idea, since that's most likely what Dash would do first. The rest of the stuff would come later, and you said before that just Dash riding on top of Twilight was boring.
And the rainbow rings in Twilight's eyes should be indication of submission enough, since that's one of the things people associate with mind control.
As for poses, Dash could be in a kicking position having just kicked the ball, Twilight ready to catch it or something. I think that would be anything BUT boring.
> you said before that just Dash riding on top of Twilight was boring.
Yes, this is bad for my gallery as it is practically a repetition. And a plus. Believe it or not, before that Dash rode Jack on one of my sketches, but at the last moment I replaced her with Twilight. Since Twilight can develop a spell for this, and an earth pony cannot. That is, this is one picture instead of a story of how Jack could have done it. Sorry, but now I have such a narrow schedule that I cannot spend more than half an hour on a picture in 3 days. So, so I chose the option with fewer questions. This also applies to Dash. For the reason of race and for the reason of IQ. Athletes usually have less time to develop due to coaching and TV careers, so this is a cliché that will pop into everyone's mind. The show picked it up too, Dash isn't the smartest character, no smarter than a regular unicorn at least.
> rainbow rings in Twilight's eyes should be indication of submission
I don't know what you're taking, my drugs are usually pink and burgundyI don't want to add anything, it just raises questions. Why invent something if you can take something that already works.
> As for poses, Dash could be in a kicking position having just kicked the ball, Twilight ready to catch it or something. I think that would be anything BUT boring.
Finally! You answered this a few days later as I asked it, thanks. But, unfortunately, I already got ahead of you. Again - the ball game looks too innocent. I went with this idea because it is a related topic to Dash. But, this does not mean that this is enough. From the outside, it still looks like two ponies are just playing with a ball. And I am not against it. If you hadn't asked me to do this about mind control. And I haven't seen it here yet.