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It was a nice day in Metal City. The birds were singing; the traffic was low. But this was no ordinary day for a certain hedgehog and two wolves. This was the day of the EX World Grand Prix Team Tournament.

"Icee, are you sure you're up for this?" the blue wolf asked. "I mean, we're racing Team Purity, three of the best Extreme Gear racers out there!"

"Eh, Becky ain't got nothin' on me," Icee replied as he put his goggles on top of his head, pushing his quills back a bit. "And Timper, I think you can handle Michelle quite nicely. Plus, Blaze can get Hannah, I'm sure." Upon hearing the name "Blaze", the green wolf looked up from the board she was polishing and smiled. Yeah, we got this one in the bag. I can almost feel it, she thought.

"Now, who are we?" Icee yelled.

"DIVINITY!" all three exclaimed, laughing. It seemed to be all fine and dandy; nothing was standing in their way of making their name known throughout the Extreme Gear world.

"Ain't got nothin' on you, eh, Icee?"

Icee looked up and saw a female blue hedgehog, her fur a bit darker than Icee's. "I guess you heard me, Becky," he said, squinting and revealing a scar across his eye. He never quite knew where he got the scar, only that it pained him to look in the mirror and see it every morning.

"That I did," Becky replied, her quills blowing in the semistrong wind. "We're gonna wipe the floor with you, right, girls?" The red and black echidna on her left nodded, and the wolf on her right smiled and waved playfully, causing Icee to blush a bit, which in turn caused Timper to pull Icee's quills hard.

"OW! Why did you do that?" Icee yelled as Timper grabbed them harder.

"You gotta stay focused on the RACE, not on Michelle! I mean, geez, she's not even your girlfriend!" Timper yelled back. Becky just sat there, laughing.

Icee batted Timper's hand off his quills. I really gotta make her stop doing that, Icee thought. Just then, a bell sounded, followed by a voice:

"All power-type racers please report to the starting line for Heat #1. You have five minutes to report there before disqualification."

"Go get 'em, Shelly," Becky said, nudging Michelle on her arm. Michelle then readied her board, as Timper did the same. "Think she can do it, Hannah?" she asked the red echidna to her side.

"Of course," Hannah replied. "I mean, seriously, that blue wolf won't stand a chance."

The competition seemed to be a dream. Past racers of the individual Grand Prix (Sonic, Knuckles, Amy) as well as those Timper knew from the battles with Artumis Prower were there. She looked around and saw a certain greyish brown kitsune fixing up her board for the flight run.

"Cake?" Timper yelled through the crowd.

"Timper? That you?" Cake replied and, after noticing the blue wolf, ran up and hugged her tightly. "It's been forever!"

"Well, I don't think six months would classify as 'forever', Cake," Timper replied, "but, yeah, it's been a while."

"And you'll never guess who else is here," Cake said, with a smile that would light up any dark room. Timper stared back, waiting for Cake to respond. "Well, there's me, Bane, Mimicr, Kyinty, and Roareye."

Timper gasped. Never would she imagine Roareye to be at an event like this. "Kitty's here, too?" she said as she stood up. "Well, things just got a bit more interesting." She smiled and readied herself on her board. "Sorry, Cake, I gotta get to the race. See ya soon!" Cake waved as Timper sped off to the starting line.

With the old gang here, this is gonna be one hell of a Grand Prix, Timper thought.
OK, here's the start of the fanfic ^^ It will be split into three seperate stories, each coming together at some point. Basically like Sonic Heroes...kinda ^^;

Icee ©
Timper ©
Blaze ©
Becky ©
Hannah ©
Michelle ©
Cake ©
Bane ©
Roareye ©
Mimicr ©
Kyinty ©

Sonic, Knuckles, and Amy are © Sonic Team/Sega
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BlazeTBW Featured By Owner May 4, 2006  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D ready for part 2!
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IceeDaHedgehog Featured By Owner May 8, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
And so am I...XP

I have it written, but I can't find my notebook. D:
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BlazeTBW Featured By Owner May 8, 2006  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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BaneTUH Featured By Owner May 4, 2006
I'm curious, is Cake racing herself?

"She looked around and saw a certain greyish brown kitsune fixing up her board for the flight run."

And does that mean I'm be racing? D:
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IceeDaHedgehog Featured By Owner May 8, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
In this order:

1) The "she" that the sentence refers to is Timper.

2) Well, I had you as Power for the Chronicles section, but meh...o.O'
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BaneTUH Featured By Owner May 8, 2006
1)How about the word "Her"

2)and...huh? Anyway, I guess Power makes sense, since Sparky would defiantly be speed. Though, Bane would defiantly be fast thanks to his rockets on his robot feet :D

He would so be favorite of the tournament >> BTW, who really is the favorites to win? XD
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IceeDaHedgehog Featured By Owner May 8, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't tell you that! >.>...XD
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BaneTUH Featured By Owner May 8, 2006
Well, I meant you should have the answer say "*Blahblahblah* is the favorite to win this year" or "Bane's the favorite amongst the ladies" :D
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IceeDaHedgehog Featured By Owner May 8, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
The race hasn't even started yet. XP I was just getting it ready in C1...lol
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BaneTUH Featured By Owner May 8, 2006
Well, that would come before any racing has started, cause the annoucer would be all like "*talks about the racers, than goes on to* blahblahblah is the favorite to win and is a real crowd pleaser"
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IceeDaHedgehog Featured By Owner May 10, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
But blahblahblah is not in the fanfic....yet =3

Anyway, I'm saving that for later. The race hasn't even gotten underway, and I'm waiting for the race to get ready to actually start before I announce favorites.
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BaneTUH Featured By Owner May 8, 2006
announcer* @_@;
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mimicrthecopeyer Featured By Owner May 4, 2006
zOMG I in it.
Still, it's pretty interesting and I'd like to see how the story goes along. The Sonic Racers-ness interests me
=P
So yeah... Just be sure that since you put me in it and stuffs, get my character right.
=D
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IceeDaHedgehog Featured By Owner May 4, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
That's not so hard to do...don't worry =P
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mimicrthecopeyer Featured By Owner May 4, 2006
I'm happy that you said it'd be easy, but the fact that you said it's easy makes me sound predictable.
Am I predictable >.> ?
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IceeDaHedgehog Featured By Owner May 4, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
Nope =3
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Zazalee--Venix--Zan Featured By Owner May 4, 2006
:giggle: I felt like I was playing Sonic Riders all over again. ^W^ Anywho, awesome fic' :nod:
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IceeDaHedgehog Featured By Owner May 4, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks ^_^

And I'm gonna get you in there somehow =3 :hug:
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Zazalee--Venix--Zan Featured By Owner May 4, 2006
^W^ :glomp:
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IceeDaHedgehog Featured By Owner May 4, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
^W^ :glomp: :smooch:
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BaneTUH Featured By Owner May 4, 2006
So far, so great. :3 I gotta take lessons from you for on how to start a fanfic XP
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IceeDaHedgehog Featured By Owner May 4, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
Heh...^^;

It's nothing more than writing, then sprucing up before you submit. The uncut version was much less interesting XP
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BaneTUH Featured By Owner May 4, 2006
Eh, yeah. Plus, in my fiction story, I'm trying to make it so I actually introduce the characters in a manner in which I believe the writer has not seen them before.

Don't worry, I'm going to spruce mine up as well before submitting it. Though, I must work on my second draft first ._.;
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IceeDaHedgehog Featured By Owner May 4, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, I really can't wait to see the finished product ^_^

If you need any help with it, I'm here.
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BaneTUH Featured By Owner May 4, 2006
Alright, thanks.
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IceeDaHedgehog Featured By Owner May 4, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
Anytime ^^
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AstraAurora Featured By Owner May 4, 2006  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Not bad not bad at all, I think you got Team purity perfectly so far =3 nice job.
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IceeDaHedgehog Featured By Owner May 4, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
After a bit of research, I think I can agree with ya. =3

Thanks much ^^
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Autobot-Revimus Featured By Owner May 4, 2006
Interesting so far. Forget to not italisize things after Blaze's thought? Didn't get in the way too much, just be aware of that Icee. Anyways, seems to be off to a good start so far. Hope you'll keep it up.
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IceeDaHedgehog Featured By Owner May 4, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
Heh, forgot to close the italics tag. Fixed though =3
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loveuall Featured By Owner May 4, 2006
Hey man! This is excellent, I like it! I especially love what you've done with contrast! It reminds me a lot of [link] . I wonder what was going through your mind when you did this? + fav!
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IceeDaHedgehog Featured By Owner May 4, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
Heh, thanks for the comparison. What was going through my mind? Wellll...definitely not the story you showed me, that's for sure ;P

Anyway, I've always wanted to try my luck at fanfic writing, but I just didn't know what to write about. But while playing Sonic Heroes (or was it Sonic Riders?), the idea came to me. =3

Thanks again for the compliments, and much thanks for the fave! =D
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