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I originally drew this for Halloween last year. Finally got around to coloring it!
Check out the Transyltown webcomic here: [link]
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I sat staring at this for a good while as there is just so much to look at. The use of line to create uneven roughness makes the background look almost tangible. The color scheme is well thought out also. The horseman's outfit being made up of the same colors as the three frontsmen add a bit of irony and humor.

I think the legs on the pink jeaned lady are too thin. They almost look sickly.

Also, the area of background between the horse and rider is a little confusing. I'm not sure if I'm looking at trees or rock, or both.
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Thanks for taking the time out to critique this piece. I'll reflect on your words for future illustrations. :D
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great work man!!!
DragonBearUzi's avatar
Nice! Keep up the good work! Your comics are awesome!
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I'm glad you like it.
Gyzmo-Grim's avatar
Most people have trouble getting the porportions correct but you did a good job.
ibroussardart's avatar
Thanks. I'm a big stickler when it comes to anatomy and perspective. I played around for a while with giving these characters big heads at one point, but never liked it.
Gyzmo-Grim's avatar
There's a trick to getting headless people in perportion to the head.
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Actually drawing a place marker for the head?
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When sketching you draw the head in and erase it later.
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Nice! Looks great!
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LunaBell's avatar
this is too cute :D
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Heh cute in a morbid sort of way.
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