Thanks for taking the time to critique this page. I never thought about how jarring it could be for Timmy to shift into a bat and the shift back so quickly for new readers. I will keep that in mind. Not sure if I want any kind of effects to accent his transformation, but thanks for the suggestion.
I hope you can read more of the comic when you get the chance!
Thanks so much for the kind words. I hope to revisit this sketch some time. (My pile of unfinished art keeps increasing lol...) I'll definitely will fix up that leg, and clean up a few of the things that are personally bugging me. Although the skyline will stay the same. The idea is to suggest that the ground the characters are standing on is what's skewed if that makes any sense.