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COMMISSION: Sunset Destiny

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Commission for Dustkun of Sunset in a Destiny-style getup.
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egyptinStudent General Artist
:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

just letting you know i'm not good at giving a good Critique but here is what i have to say.

I really like this drawing of Sunset Shimmer but..... What I would do is make her nose smaller and more like a mare and not like a stallion. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/> I would also try to make the lines more smooth and smoother shading on her face. maybe the roughness is the style you were going for but that is my Critique on this drawing so I hope you find this helpful for you upcoming drawings <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/> I know its not much of a Critique but its all I have. and I hope the best on you newer drawing in the future <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>
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Hi, I appreciate your comments, but given you rated the artwork 5 stars when it's clearly not perfect, I'm gonna have to mark the critique as unfair. BUT if you want to post your critique on my artwork anyway, feel free to copy it and post it as a comment :)

I appreciate your feedback!
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egyptinStudent General Artist
i rated it a 5 star because i wanted to show support. doesn't matter if it is perfect or not.
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HyperDashPony General Artist
Okay, thanks ^^