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Picture belonging in the same shoot as my first Picture.
Hope you like it.
the flapper was short-haired, modern and outrages--
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DefyProcrastination Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Professional Writer
Fantastic job! You really captured the essence of an era.

I just had to use this pic for a short story post on my blog. I'm doing a new series of posts centered on a Private Detective named Dan Swagger staged in the 1920's.

Here is the link to the post: [link]

Of course I gave you credit and linked back to your site and the original.

If you get a chance, I'd love to get your feedback on the story.


Michael A. Walker
Defying Procrastination
www.want2bwriter.com
Facebook/DefyingProcrastination
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hyllna Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013   Photographer
Oh My god! I havent been active in here in years I just accidentally read "deviant" and I was like: deviant? deviant? where have I heard that word before?! Soo nice to log in and read beautiful comments! thank you, thank you very much:)
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DefyProcrastination Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Professional Writer
You are most welcome. You have a gift, hopefully you still have been using in your absence from Deviant. :-)
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xXYvetteXx Featured By Owner May 24, 2012
This looks wonderful! I actually drew this during my senior year in high school for an art project. I had no clue it was on DeviantArt! I love it!
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hyllna Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013   Photographer
Thank you sweetheart:)!
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kimberlyranne Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2009
Wow this is a beautiful exposure. I love the angle and the vintage feel.
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hyllna Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2009   Photographer
thank you :)
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Anackhsunamun Featured By Owner May 1, 2009
wow!!!
thats a great pic!! :D
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chiquillo Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2007  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
it s perfect technically..
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tlz Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2007
Ser at du prøver deg på før-krigs looken og av de to bildene er det desidert denne du klarer det best med. Vår nesten Marlene Dietrich-vibber av dette! Hunu holder røyken på rett måte, men det burde vært en sånn lengre(med hvitt filter) satt i sånn svart-røykholde-dings. Men makeupen og stilen generelt er ellers rett på. Komposjonen funker bra. Blikket kunne vært litt mer ... hvordan skal jeg beskrive dette, aggressivt på en feminin måte. (Igjen se på gamle bilder av Marlene Dietrich, eller dagens svar på henne: Dita Von These) Ordet "sultry" som leaf-lover nevner treffer spikeren..

Veldig bra, men noen småting(røyken og at det er litt utydelig noen steder) som hindrer den fra å bli virkelig fantastis

;per kommanteraen var konstruktiv og motiverende for deg.
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van-goghbutterflies Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2007
Both of the flapper pictures are great! I really love the profile view, though. The way she's holding the cigarette is just perfect! And I love her expression...
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One-Of-18-Angels Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2007   Photographer
this one is just wonderfull,it's going on my fav list ^^
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hyllna Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2007   Photographer
thank you, I appreciate it!
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leaf-lover Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2007
While the overall image is technically very sound and the clarity is good, I feel that the expression of the model could be worked upon. Here, she looks a little... Well to be honest it's hard to determine quite how she feels. A little more of a sultry look would give this piece a great sense of atmosphere that would fit well with the style.
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hyllna Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2007   Photographer
thank you a lot for critisism! I dont understand what the word "sultry" means :O I can check my dictionary, but if you'd like you could try to explain?
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leaf-lover Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2007
Sultry means slighty seductive. Sort of sexy without being over the top and horrible. It allows the model to look and feel sexy but doesn't make them look dirty.
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farcry77 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
In short what I think of this photograph :sprint:

Exposure : good.
Colors : dramatic and vintage
Focus : fine
Composition : good but can improve
Subject interest : Nice model with lovely eyes. I like ur focus. Its very sharp and correct.
Things to improve : Maybe the possition of the hand. The fingers are not quite clearly visible.

This comment is solely on my viewpoint of this photo so if you wish to correct me kindly do so. Kindly note that Im not trying to judge your work in any manner :bow: Even some points I mentioned above can be negative I decide to comment since its an interesting piece at the first place. I hope I helped u in some way. :handshake:
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hyllna Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2007   Photographer
thanks. Will take it with me.. :)
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Rock--Angel Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
very chic shot!!
well done!
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Anachronist84 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2007
You've done fantastic work, here. I love this.
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hyllna Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2007   Photographer
thank you ;) I need to get better at the black and white converting, but Im happy about the result! :)
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coy716 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2007
it makes smoking glamourous, old hollywood, love it
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hyllna Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2007   Photographer
thank you :)
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hyllna Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2007   Photographer
Dont like commenting my own picture, but Im just wondering if Ive done something wrong here :P
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