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Sir Lionel

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By HunterBrony101   |   
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© 2016 - 2020 HunterBrony101
My OC, Sir Lionel. 

Likes: Reading, jousting, animals.

Abilities: Fighting spell, sword combat.

Family: Jessica(Wife), Lancelot(Son), Luna(Daughter-in-Law), Jason(Grandson)


 My Little Pony Friendship is Magic belongs to :iconhasbroplz: and :iconfyre-flye: . 

Do not use without permission!!!!!

His cutie mark would be a shield with a cross in it. 
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:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
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Okay, So its clear that you used a pony creator to make this - and you should have credited the creator of that game. Pony creators are okay for making a basic OCs or concept designs, but I would have liked to have seen you draw this yourself. You could have taken the time to add a Cutiemark or at least re-position the character because the current position is rather lifeless.

However, you chose nice bright colours and kept it simple to create a memorable character. Your colours do work well and its clear you though before choosing them. You have included his basic information which gives him depth.

Again, the only downside to this is the fact that you used someone elses creator and effectively someone else's art to do this. A backstory could add more life and depth.

Overall its a good character, Keep it up! (:
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
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I like the style and color scheme, it's expression is adorable, but what is it's cutie mark, it's destiny. I would love to know. Other than that it is a really nice design, crisp, clean lines, I would like to see a family portrait please. i also want some sort of backstory, but if you already have one please send me it. that would be very nice of you to do that for me. I love your work, it's something else you know. You have a wonderful technique and an eye for color, I even see how passion you put in.