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JESUS FUCKING CHRIST U WOULDNT BELIEVE HOW LONG THIS TOOK

THANKS TO ALL THE PPL WHO ENDED UP @ MY STREAM IT WAS GREAT ILY KISS KISS<3

update:6/11/16
i requested critiques because i feel like most of my other pieces never get me as involved and absorbed as painting does so I'd like to know how other view this piece. Please be as critical as you can be!! But also be constructive with it. Just saying it was good or bad doesnt really help )-:
Anyway, thanks!! I feel like this has been the best piece I've ever done and I want to get back into doing painted styles I just get really uninspired sometimes so...(-:
 tldr; be critical bc i want to improve
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Before I say anything, I love this piece and I love Sona, and the colouring is on point and the background contrasts very well. What I did notice though is that her right hand (on the left from our perspective) is a fair bit larger than her left, it looks like her palm is almost as large as her face. If it were shrunken down a little bit it would look much better. The fingers on the right hand don't seem to be structured properly, they only appear to have 2 joints on each finger where they should have 3, if they do have 3 and the last joints aren't visible because of the pose, the fingers should be much further down on the palm. On the contrary, her left hand's definition from hand to wrist is lacking, If you did some shading to make the separation more apparent it would make it look much more natural. At the start of the ponytails (I don't know the names of hairstyles don't judge me |:U ) the small locks of hair sticking out don't blend very well with the rest, they look kind of like feathers in her hair. If they were to come up like that and then blend back into the hair it would look much more natural. Little tip, a good way of getting definition on the hair style is to lack consistency on both sides, don't make them seem symmetrical and don't repeat patterns, that way it will look more natural. There is no way of saying this without looking like a perv but it's in the name of art, her bust is to small. In the in game splash art her breasts are a fair amount larger than they are displayed here. In the splash art as well her clothes around her chest fit tightly, where as here they seem to be more loose. The final thing I noticed was that her collar bone is a little bit too apparent, the shading on it should fade out as you move from chest to shoulders. I hope this helps ^^, never stop doing what you do.
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Starman1999 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2016
Great work. I love her long dress. Very cute
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houtani Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
aw thank u^Q^
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Starman1999 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2016
Sure. Do any of your girl ocs wear long skirts
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houtani Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i only have 2 that do which are:

OC: Laila and oc - Lubellia + [SPEEDPAINT] do 00:
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Starman1999 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2016
Right got it
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Starman1999 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2016
Right got it
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houtani Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank u!!Llama Emoji-60 (Snug or Hug) [V3] 
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meltypeach Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2015  Student General Artist
ahh she looks so cute
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houtani Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks so much!!
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meltypeach Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2015  Student General Artist
welcome!
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MaiKunoichiUchiha Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sona >v< :heart:
so beautiful
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houtani Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you!!!
(((-:
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kya-tama Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omg i love this so much Hatsune Miku-13 (Wink and Heart) 
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houtani Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you!!!
it means aa lot because it took forever Miuna Crying Icon Miuna Crying Icon Miuna Crying Icon Miuna Crying Icon Miuna Crying Icon Miuna Crying Icon 
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kya-tama Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol i know those feels Sweat Drop 
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