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Aya concept art by Hotaru-oz Aya concept art by Hotaru-oz
Concept art for a comic I'm working on.
I'm still fleshing out her personality but I jotted down the basic gist of it.

I'd like to know what your opinion is of her, What improvements could I make?

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Liketheisland Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Hmmm I'd have to see her in a lineup of other characters to know if her silhouette is working or not, but that's all that comes to mind. The color scheme is nicely limited and balanced, and it looks like you're well on your way to giving her a developed and interesting character. Looks like you didn't make her an annoyingly perfect/all-powerful Mary-Sue, so you're good. :D
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Hotaru-oz Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks, I wanted to keep everything simple and avoid turning my characters into Mary-Sues.
I'll be linking other character concepts in the description so feel free to check them out.
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May 13, 2013
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HTC
Model
HTC One XL
Shutter Speed
1/20 second
Aperture
F/2.0
Focal Length
4 mm
ISO Speed
849
Date Taken
May 11, 2013, 1:17:58 PM
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Adobe Photoshop CS5 Windows
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