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Put The Dad Down

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Friendly reminder that Deku can lift All Might. I heard that Izuku Midoriya has an 8-pack, I heard that Izuku Midoriya is shredded.
Izuku's hair looks completely different each time I draw it </3 I honestly have no clue how it works </3

I... I just want Izuku to be happy with his super dad Cry forever 

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sandiip98's avatar
Aw i find this so lovely and i love the way you colored it
HoshiNoDestiny's avatar
Thank you so much<3
your-neighbor-kubo's avatar
Hello there! I really like the way you colored this, but the anatomy is somewhat off. But that's not my point here--I saw this drawing reposted on a group on facebook and ahh, no, the guy didn't claim to own the art, but he did make fun of it and the comments as well were just horrible and just rude. If you'd like to see it, I'll send you the link, for now I'll just send a screenshot on your tumblr. 

I'm so sorry this happened to you; gosh, I dislike it whenever people get bullied because of their art--especially because artists are always growing, criticizing is fine, but making fun of the artwork is just--god no. 
HoshiNoDestiny's avatar
I saw your message a bit ago, thanks for sending, I reported them but apparently there's no way to take it down...
The thing is that I know the anatomy is off. Not only I asked for critique on how to improve right after I posted this, but it's over a year old. I kept practicing for 365 after this. I fixed the mistakes. I'd like to know how they'd feel to have the mistakes they did ages ago pointed out only to make fun of them in front of the whole web.
Guess I'll let them laugh and not waste my time on them.
your-neighbor-kubo's avatar
Ahh gosh, really? It can't be taken down? Damn, man.

Also, ahh, oh my!! I just noticed that this was a year ago aSDFGH!! I'm so sorryy! But I checked your account and your improvement is evident! I hope the people who made fun of you changed their ways because I love your improvement and it's amazing how you're accepting criticism and just focusing on improving rather than the people who're just plain rude. You're doing amazing, m'dude!! ✨✨✨
ZafiroBladen's avatar
actually, you can. an "artist" is making fun of your drawing on her page on Facebook, and people are responding to this ( she made a "redraw" and make bashful comments about yours)  a friend and I would like to support you on taking it down, we know that her action is super wrong, we are artists too, we have our own improvement at our own time and we hate this kind of stuff. your art is great, everyone makes mistakes but, making fun, making hurtful comments and even humiliate the artist ON PUBLIC is not okay.

sorry for my poor English, is not my mother tongue.
KehXKeova's avatar
This is so adorable!! :heart:
KehXKeova's avatar
You're welcome!! :hug:
Idleye's avatar
Here's some crit. I hope you don't take it to heart. I feel like background was slapped on after the characters are drawn, since the level of detail is lacking. And the inconsistent black lines are off putting. I feel like you were going for that comic-y cel shaded style but I feel that you should look at more illustrations of that style to get a better understanding of what you're going for. And the proportions of the characters a bit strange. Specifically on the face. The wrinkles are exaggerated, making it look like the (blonde) character has a mask on. The teeth are crooked (I understand that it's a thing but not really). The eyes are huge, and I think that you could tone it down a little bit. As for the green haired dude, theres something weird going on with his torso/shoulder area and it seems that his arms are way too thick (a subjective matter). 
HoshiNoDestiny's avatar
Sorry for the really late answer, I was out of town in the past few days!
Thank you so much for your critique!
The background was kinda slapped here just to fill the blank space, I should have elaborated it a bit more! I usually do big eyes on young characters, so I guess they really don't fit the old man!
MarcoPellino's avatar
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The coloring is interesting, nice shading for the sky and for the sand. I like how you rendered the hairs and the line art about the hair is interesting and well done.
Even if the coloring is nice and there is good shading it looks flat and there is no spatial dept. This painting looks flat and the fabric and all the material with what are done the clothes are not rendered. There is anatomical sproportions and the use of black line in my opinion is too strong, at least on the upper man. There is a huge anatomical mistake on the boy arm and on the chest, the neck and the face of the blonde man. I know that All Might character has a strange anatomy with a very long neck but the face is very strange due to the usage of violet shadow near his eyes.
A more accurate anatomy and a more precise rendering would make this painting look very intersting! :)
HoshiNoDestiny's avatar
Sorry for the really late answer, I was out of town in the past few days!
Thank you so much for your critique! When you say it looks flat, do you mean to say I need to use darker colors for shading?
All Might always looks weird in my style, I think I still haven't found a decent balance between exaggerated features and correct anatomy!
Do you mind if I ask you to tell me what I should correct on Deku's arm? I don't get exactly what's wrong!
MarcoPellino's avatar
A by MarcoPellino  
This is a quick construction I've made with paint :D The elbow should be more to the left, both arm part need to be equivalent in lenght, but you've made the superior part shorter than the forearm. In this way it looks like he has dislocate his shoulder.
HoshiNoDestiny's avatar
... ciao.
Ho realizzato adesso che sei italiano.

Comunque, grazie infinite per il redraw! Li apprezzo sempre tantissimo, a volte anche più dei commenti, perché riescono a darmi un'idea più chiara dell'errore e di come andrebbe corretto! Avevo visto c'era qualcosa che non andava nel braccio, ma non sapevo spiegarmi cosa! L'ho fatto più corto per dare l'idea della prospettiva, visto che dovrebbe circondare il corpo dell'altro personaggio, ma mi sono reso conto ora che doveva piegarsi verso l'interno l'avambraccio, mentre la parte superiore rimane dritta!
Grazie ancora per il tuo aiuto, lo apprezzo tantissimo!
MarcoPellino's avatar
ahah
Mica ci avevo guardato sul tuo profilo :D
Comunque di niente, poi considera che il mio redraw sicuramente è impreciso perché nemmeno io conosco alla perfezione l'anatomia :) Il mio professore mi ha detto che mano a mano che disegnamo troveremo sempre qualche parte del corpo che non ci piace più come viene, che non ci porta, e quello è il momento di ristudiarla più a fondo... considera che in questo periodo sono proprio in fissa con le braccia, le sto disegnando e ridisegnando per trovare la naturalezza che mi serve :D 
HoshiNoDestiny's avatar
E io non avevo fatto caso al tuo username... ops :'D
Ti capisco, alla fine nessuno hai mai finito di perfezionare le sue tecniche e conoscenze, non si arriva mai a un livello in cui si smette di migliorare (per fortuna!), ma io sono del parere che il parere di una persona serva sempre, a prescindere delle sue conoscenze, per vedere gli errori che tu non noti!
Trovo sia davvero un ottimo consiglio! Dovrò metterlo in pratica, anche se già adesso quando vedo qualcosa che non mi convince mi soffermo di più su quel dettaglio a lavorarci su... purtroppo sono uno studente full-time e non ho mai abbastanza tempo di dedicarmi come vorrei all'arte e fare qualche studio e un po' più di pratica in generale!
MarcoPellino's avatar
:)
Sono contento di poter essere d'aiuto. 
Guarda io lavoro part time, ma con il tempo per arrivare in ufficio e altro è come se facessi 40 ore a settimana... Però è arte, e come direbbe un'altro professore che conosco "se non ci crediamo noi in quello che facciamo come possono crederci gli altri quando glielo presenteremo?" :D
E' dura disegnare ogni giorno e farlo con costanza, ma alla lunga ripaga! ;)
Buona fortuna!
HoshiNoDestiny's avatar
Madò, dev'essere una stancata spaventosa avere così tanto tempo per arrivare! Sono felice che tu abbia un lavoro, però! Io stavo pensando di iniziare a cercarlo, per cominciare a pagarmi l'università da solo, ma con tutto il tempo che dedico allo studio, non ho idea di come farei!
Concordo pienamente anche con quest'altro tuo professore! 
Io ormai al disegnare ogni giorno mi ci sono abituato, ma riuscire a fare roba seria e studi decenti è il vero problema!

Hai fatto l'artistico o qualche scuola d'arte, per caso?
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Sarapolpet's avatar
Wooo figo *0* é fatto benissimo, bravo *^*
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