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Tempuri Commission by HoneyMochaCat Tempuri Commission by HoneyMochaCat
The last of the commissions for :iconbobstickles: <3
Sorry it took so long ^^; But, on the bright side, my work improved a little.
Tempuri (c) :iconbobstickles:
I actually looked up a boob tutorial for this one. I know that I kind of draw them weird so..... Do they look okay? XD
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Things that could be improved :

* Her hand is too small and her wrist a bit too thin compared to the rest of her arm. Your hand is about as big as your face. Try putting your hand on it and you'll see it almost fits

* The eye that's closed should be lower. When you close your eye it comes on the same level as the lower part of the open eye.

* The breasts are a bit akward, you wouldn't be able to see those two lines pushing against each other. Even if the character has a big chest. If they'e bit they should be hanging down a bit more and you'll only be able to see folds under them.

BUT! There are also lots of positive things!

* The shading is really nice. <3 I love the pattern on the pants that makes it look like real jeans.

* It's a cute character and the hair is really well done.
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Bobstickles Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wah she looks so cute :la: and I think youve improved a lot since the last time I checked out your work as well :D thank you some much I love it, you did a wonderful job~~ :iconaawplz:
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HoneyMochaCat Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank youu! :D
You're very welcome >w< I had a lot of fun with all of your commissions <3
Uh...you do owe me 25 points though, I believe ^^; Since there's only 25 in the donation pool and I do my payments in segments.
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Bobstickles Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
your welcome~~
glad you did :meow:
oh I do haha sorry I'll pay it now then :D
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HoneyMochaCat Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much ^.^
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OblomS Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Student Interface Designer
cool
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HoneyMochaCat Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks ^^
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