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Kaiden and Nils Commission Sketch by HoneyMochaCat Kaiden and Nils Commission Sketch by HoneyMochaCat
I really love this commission~ Some yaoi XDD
This commission is for :iconxx-spanky-xx: it's not really completed yet but they wanted to see the sketch XD
I had a TON of help from :icondeadisalivebutending: who sketched out a base for me to help me get the hang of the pose. Sitting poses have always been difficult for me so thank you VERY much :iconbowplz: Hopefully the next time I do a sitting pose I'll be able to do it without any help :3 I watched you draw this as well..so~
Anyway, if there's anything that needs fixing, my dear commissioner, please tell me :D
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schatzi333221 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I'll quickly give a few pointers on this one, 'kay? :meow:?

Hmmm, I like it, first of all... >//w//<

And as for the line art itself, I see a few things you could work on. c:

The first thing is the hand belonging to the person on the right. The hand that's beside the guy's neck? The fingers would be different lengths, not all the same. c;
And the forearm belonging to the person on the left, that part looks a little too short when compared to the upper arm.
Also last thing is that the shin of the same person on the left looks a little too wide.

But I like the way you've done the clothes design, and the person on the right, I like the way you've done his legs. c:

That is all~ c:
Other then that it's a very lovely picture. ^^
I'm sorry if I'm not a very good critique. ^^;
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HoneyMochaCat Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah....I actually didn't do the base...one of my friends helped me with the pose. She pretty much drew it for me in a sense. It said so in the description...
I'm very sorry :iconbowplz:
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schatzi333221 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
AGGGH REALLY I DIDN'T EVEN. D'X
SO SORRY. :(
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HoneyMochaCat Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
;A; It's okay!! I'm the one who's sorry! I should have been more specific about the picture that I wanted you to critique...
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schatzi333221 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, it's alright. ^^
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XX-Spanky-XX Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011
Love it <3
Couple tiny things though;
Kaiden also has freckles on his shoulders.
And Nils eyes and now blue....and his hair is either dark or dirty blonde. =w=
Other than that, it's adorable <3
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HoneyMochaCat Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm glad~
Alright :3
Okay...let me make sure I got this right
-Kaiden, shoulder, freckles
-Nils, eyes, blue
-Nils, hair, dirty blonde (that's what I'll use :3)
Everything's fixed in my version :D thank you! I'm glad you like it so far!
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XX-Spanky-XX Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011
Yep, perfect <3
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HoneyMochaCat Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Kay :S
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