Holicia

Hey guys, this is a rough draft of my presentation, I was wondering if I could get criticism please and please tell if you get the meaning of this poem too. And maybe suggest a  better title...and maybe I'll find a way to rhyme this... thanks L is for Life, L is for Cookie By: Me! (of course haha) Life is a chocolate chip cookie It tastes sweet when whole and a little empty when a bit is missing. All those flour, sugar, baking, and time into it, All those dreams, hopes, and aspirations built it. Every bite you take a little bit Is forgotten or thrown away. Every chocolate chip eaten Is a value taken or you emptily say. As time go

hmm.....i think you guys told me to make a journal to put it here.....? iono so  whatever here's the link for mine, so when yur done yours I'll put it here too! is that how it's suppose to work? http://holicia.deviantart.com/art/Aegis-100008800

Okay, I've gone out of my mind....XD I dun know....i'm reading Dreams from My Father by Barack Obama and then I am suddenly plagued with the urge to write this XD. lol is all i can say. though maybe it was from a few days ago and I just remembered now or from a fleeting feeling. While reading, my mind wanders into the future XD, what in the world am I gonna be, what will i be doing, then it wanders onto a...face and then I have, as have already said, a fleeting feeling and I...think and..... okay, here's what i see: I'm arriving at some high school, I try to find the school and I think "ah" that must be it. Formidable and intimidating,