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the real fight by hiritai the real fight by hiritai

This guy has been through a big re-working. Character, appearence, blahblahblah. Trying to work him in with my other characters without changing the story was my aim, and I'm pretty sure this will work.

Deja 'Mystic' Sunder is his name, and rare/dangerous/powerful/mythical/historical artifacts are his game. Living in an ancient mine on the side of a mountain, Mystic has built an enormous library of secrets and other dangerous things. He keeps to himself, mostly, only sharing his hoard if you have something he wants more than whatever he already has (in which you'd better want more than anything else if you're climbing that damn mountain for just five minutes of his time).

Aside from that, he's done a lot of hunting. He'll hunt anything if the money/reward is good.

Mystic also thinks he is haunted by the ghost of his father, which inhabits a painting... when, really, he's just a bit nutty.

I actually bought him a dark brown wig, but I kind of maybe like this one better. Which is an expensive boo-boo, considering this one had been lying around for months :/ Kind of don't want him to have grey hair, but he looks so damn good in it x.x


Mystic is a Crobidoll Lance from [link]

Please read my FAQ before asking any questions! Thanks for looking <3
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Your pohotography is wonderful but when you faded out some of the body it caught on to the hands and hair....but you may have wanted it to catch onto the hair...The pose and positioning is perfect. The way you made the doll look so expressive (not meaning that you shaped the face) but the pose and position of the face show meaning and expression... I think that if you had shown the whole body it would give the picture a more real feeling,unless the setting was wrong then the close-up was a wonderful Idea. I hope that you take some of this advice and use it, but I really am complimenting this in my own way
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I really have to say that i love his facial expression here compared to the position/pose you have him in. I like that they are very much opposites. He seems so thoughtful and at peace even though his situation appears to be a bit uncomfortable. It's almost as if he doesn't mind it so much. lol I love the color of his eyes as well and how they are really the only dark color in the light picture. This also reiterates the contrast of his 'feelings' for lack of a better word, and situation. I totally send kudos your way for wokring WITH his expression instead of trying to hide it like some doll owners do in order to get the image they want.
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Naarok0fKor Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Plme de Choumini by Naarok0fKor  
DollsNCoffee Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
He looks so amazing! 
ivilai Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
lajvio Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Ohh so beautiful!
Like hos his hands ate tied up :3 A bit kinky :D
I like the story as well, very interesting :3
Kamikaze718 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Foxy-chan10012 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011
So beautiful. The eyes captivate me... Woah. @.@
TayMcKayPhotography Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
your doll has been featured! ^^ [link]
aexia22 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2011
i like it ..:D
Shikitoka Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011
Amazing ! <3
ChrisAmaru Featured By Owner May 4, 2011  Student General Artist
Love the doll. The picture was taken beautifully as well.
Winged-Vayla Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2011
I know you don't like questions but I checked your FAQ and I didn't see it in there, but I really would like to know what wig this is. Because I've been looking for a wig like this for ages.
Kodey-kun Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2010
Amazing *г*
6206 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is a guy?! ... Duh!!
Blazethecat16 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2010
so beautiful.. even for a boy doll >.<
undecided-truth Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010
what im getting from this me personally of course is that the real fight is within am i right.but still i love the doll work and beautiful work thanks
Fluffycritters Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2010
love zee hair!
xxcaramelxx Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Rinoa-girl Featured By Owner May 8, 2010
What kind of doll is this doll? What make I mean eg Lutz, Dream Dolls....He/she is very pretty! (Interested in getting at least one doll one day lol)
Rainbowtunnelz Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2010
WOW! , amazing
blondofu Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2010   Photographer
:heart: :heart:
fairyytalexoxo Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2010
His eyes are gorgeous <3 So so gorgeous <3 And I agree, the grey really suits him <3
DeidaraSenpai Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
Kingpoof Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautifull face-up :love:
What a pretty boy!
ElementalFoxGoddess Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2009
My my...what a beautiful boy!!....but I am going to try to make mine even more so....though I don't know a thing about I am going to try to do the best I can.....I migh do it in anime though heheheh!! Love ur pic! He is beautiful!!! he has delicate hands!!
MetropolisOni Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009
I love his face. Did you do the face-up urself?
Missepige Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009
You inspired me to buy a doll like these too o__o
I love the picture, and the mix between sorrow and happiness, I feel. (I'm weird huh?). I looked on the website in the description, and I sure loved what I saw. I decided that if I ever get the money I would buy a Lance xD Then I read that the doll in your picture was a Lance O,O God I was surprised! Keep up this good work, and stick with the grey! It looks great <3 You WON him? I wish I was that lucky xD Each time I win something it's either cofee or towels =.= is... >.< Ever heard of Delfs? They are awesome Dolls too <3 They actually look really like these, but I don't know if they are the same xD
Luts is a good website to find a Delf, If you want to take a look ;)
Dante03 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2009
Can you tell me with type of lance he is. I hope he's not the sold out out one cause i love him, and i want him.
hiritai Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2009
Thank you! <3 Lance are all the same, it's just the faceup that differs. He has a custom faceup, I won him in a contest and they just did him like this ^^
Dante03 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2009
They did a very good job with the face up. I'm kinda practicing but...It's not working out so well. And my poor Ducan's paying the price.:shakefist:
I wish i could show you pictures but, long story short brothers stick the wrong things in the wrong ports.
ClevageMonsterx217 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2009
Beautiful! I love the colors in it :]
evilnymph Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
here I download again. best inspiring doll ever.
candygirlcandice Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2009   Interface Designer
are u sure its a he?looks like a her..
RetroNinja Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
This photo is amazing. He looks like an angel. Love the quality and the detail. It's so breath-taking and amazing. I could look at the photo for hours in awe. *____*
SierraTheCat Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I thought he was a girl! Gorgeous!
misaki-lan Featured By Owner May 29, 2009
I've seen lots of lance, and Mystic is my favorite one. He's so cute and temperate. I cannot even describe how greatful and tender he is in words. I personally think he's the most gorgeous lance I've seen.
Akatsuki-No-Adriane Featured By Owner May 28, 2009
omg i thought it was a girl but hes still really gorgouse!!
koosha Featured By Owner May 30, 2009  Professional General Artist
word. :D
Akatsuki-No-Adriane Featured By Owner May 30, 2009
KuRumi-FlameSamurai Featured By Owner May 27, 2009
Waaaaaaaaa!!! *dies* I love it so much :heart:!!!
PestSunny Featured By Owner May 27, 2009
nice job . ;D
xXxHXCxCassandraxXx Featured By Owner May 16, 2009
gorgeous! :3
LidLuvsU Featured By Owner May 6, 2009
Ohhh pretty =]
Echoes-of-Elaris Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, what an intriguing story. I can't wait to learn more about him.

*hints at Mysticfics*
Ran-ras Featured By Owner May 4, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
he's BEAUtiful.
yeah, grey hair looks good on him... but he looks like one of ur dolls.. he looks exactly like him..(sorry forgot the name) so the idea of changing his hair is not a bad idea... try it make him as graceful like him being in gray hair. ^^
Kitrina-the-Great Featured By Owner May 3, 2009
I really the face paint, especially the detail in the eyes.
RiKkU-DA-THieF Featured By Owner May 3, 2009
Oh wow, that looks brilliant. So pretty.. --pokes wig--
His faceup is so --squeeee--

And on another completely unrelated note, what the sheet is this "Critique" crap? Like we need a Premium account to write critique about a work :\
What a load of shit XDD
BloodyRose90 Featured By Owner May 2, 2009
It's so beautiful! I really adore your work :D
Kingpoof Featured By Owner May 2, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautifull. It looks so innocent ^^
simonthefish Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2009   Writer
I swear to god, every time you change his look I love him more.
Tomoe21 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
where it's the "buy this print" button!!!! i love it!!!!!!!!!!111
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