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Hello Fans,

I decided to do a new contest this year and this time, I will give a three-month premium-membership to the winner.

The theme is a story about my OC David after he was turned into a genie.
Setting Things right - Ending 4 by hippo2
 Tell us the tale of him meeting his first Master or Mistress and how David grants their wish(es). The Story should fit into my Martha universe. The genie rules to obey are:

  • The genie has to grant one wish minimum to whoever holds the lamp (but they can decide to grant more wishes - This means you can decide for your story how many wishes David will grant his master/mistress).
  • Genie's can't kill. (Inanimate transformations don't count as killing, since the consciousness of the victim is bound inside the object and the victim can be restored.)
  • They can't bring the dead back from death.
  • The Master or Mistress can't wish for more wishes, than the genie had promised to grant.
  • The Master or Mistress can't wish that the genie is bound to him/her for an indefinite time.
  • The genie is not allowed to bend the free will of another person (e.g. making a person fall in love with the master)

Try to keep David roughly in character according to my stories: He was the heir of a hotel in Switzerland and engaged with Amelia Maus. One of his employees was the genie Martha. Unfortunately, David thought that all genies are evil. To teach him a lesson, Martha turned David into a genie and bound him to her old lamp. Now David can prove himself if all genies are evil or not. Martha teleported the lamp away so David will meet his first master, where your story will start.
Please use paragraphs to make your story readable. Also avoid orthographical faults as good as you can.

Language should be english.

Extend is 2000 words maximum.

Deadline is May 17th; 18:00 Central European time.

Only one entry per contestant is allowed.

Price: I will give the winner a three-month premium membership. And I will draw a picture for the story.

Post your entry before deadline and write in the description that it is for the contest. Then inform me about your work.

Contest Entries

David and Amelie's Magical AdventureEver since he was turned into a genie by his former friend Martha, David was in a cross mood. How could get on with his life and marry his fiancé Amelie Maus if he were a genie?
Amelie had remained by his side despite the change. She loved David and was with him.
“Well there’s no use in putting off the inevitable Martha” David said with a weary sigh “I have to find my lamp with my first master. I can only hope whoever they are they are nicer than Martha”
“I’m coming with you David. You’re going to be my husband and couples stick together through thick and thin!” Amelie said with resolve. She was disappointed by Martha’s actions, but still she hoped her former friend had a reason for it that she did not understand yet.
David smiled at his love and said to no one in particular “All right lamp I’m ready to find you and my first master!”
With that a flash of light came and a door magically in the middle of
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Progress on my new comic

A few weeks ago, I made a poll about what big project I shall work on next. You decided for a comic with Amelia and David that includes TG elements. The comic is scripted now and will have eight pages when completed.
Current Status: :star::star::star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty:


Art Trades


:iconsilva592: finished: fav.me/d6cknqk His part of the deal (drawing of Martha) is still pending.
:iconagnethamoon: finished: fav.me/d7d3xrn Her part: fav.me/d7dlv1c
:icondukewolfendoom: finsished: fav.me/d7eknbe His part: fav.me/d7ekmio


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:iconmagicshoppe:
magicshoppe Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014
Did David ever visit the inside of Martha's (or any other genie's) lamp before?
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hippo2 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014
No, he wasn't.
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magicshoppe Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
I might have been a good idea to add one more criteria.
* When David leaves his old master, his bottle teleports away with no control over the destination. Thus the stories would seem coherent since each story would start with where David "landed" after his teleport.
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hippo2 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
That depends on the story. If David is wished free, the series ends. And since I said, it should be about David's first master, we would propably get one new first master after another, which wouldn't really work as a chain of stories.
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Nayzor Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
One more thing I wasn;t sure of Thom. Amelie and David are still together right?
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:iconhippo2:
hippo2 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
Yeah. In that ending, both are engaged. And Amelia is quite angry about what Martha did do David.
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:iconnayzor:
Nayzor Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
OK good to know this story will have an SSU-style harem story
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hippo2 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
If you like to.
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Nayzor Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
Say can David's first master be another genie?
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:iconhippo2:
hippo2 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
No. Genies can't be masters of other genies.
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:iconnayzor:
Nayzor Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
OK I'll think of a cute SSU-set story OK?
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:iconhippo2:
hippo2 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
You can do it, if you like.
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Nayzor Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
I think I'm interested if we did an SSU locale with David where would you like it?
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:iconhippo2:
hippo2 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
If you want to take part in the contest, you have to write a story. Where the story is set is up to you.
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:iconnayzor:
Nayzor Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
OK I'll remember that David is Swiss right? Can you tell me more about him?
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:iconhippo2:
hippo2 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
Did you read my stories?
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:iconnayzor:
Nayzor Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
Yes
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hippo2 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
Then you should know about David.
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:iconnayzor:
Nayzor Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
OK
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hippo2 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
Nayzor, I can't tell you how I want to see David in the story. It wouldn't be fair towards other contestants.
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Punisher2006 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist
This sounds interesting, I might do it.
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:iconhippo2:
hippo2 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014
Good luck!
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Punisher2006 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist
Thanks. ^^
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