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Mouse from the Past 3/3 by hippo2 Mouse from the Past 3/3 by hippo2
A short comic featuring Amelia and David. It's set after "Doing a Maid's" job (hippo2.deviantart.com/gallery/…

Translation note: In panel 4, David calls Amelia "Mäuschen". This is a german petting name meaning "little mouse". The translation my dictionary offered was "pumpkin", but I prefered to stick with the german word to keep the humor intact.

Previous part: fav.me/d7lcol6
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Midnight-Nightscape Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Student Writer
Adorable. I like how Amelia remembers that she was once a mouse and could be if not for fortunate circumstances (and a revenge plotting maid). Also nice to see David's sense of humor is still intact after his adventure.
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EmperorNortonII Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
That's a sweet comic.
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magicshoppe Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
The "little mouse" joke was lost to me without the translation note. When reading the strip, I just assumed it was German for "mouse" or perhaps "my mouse".

I just noticed David has the towel wrapped around him all the way up to his chest and not down by his waist. I've never seen a man do that.
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hippo2 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
On second thought: Yes, a normal man wouldn't wrap a towel like this. But David was Daphne for a day. And just like Daphne didn't sit very ladylike in the Cinema, David has adapted some female mannerisms. It's not much but still visible if you look close enough.
I also fixed Panel 3 now.
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hippo2 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
Yeah, the towel thing is because of not using the mature filter. It's not completely consistent, I know, but I have to take some artistic liberties here.
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Jorrun Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014
happy ending :)
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Agnethamoon Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Süß! :D
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kaaslave Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014
Awww, how sweet! :D
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