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Dreamy Holyday - Part 1 by hippo2 Dreamy Holyday - Part 1 by hippo2
It was two months into the new year and the weather had been bad for weeks. The cold temperatures around Christmas hadn't last long and were replaced by rainy weather. The relief the Christmas break brought to Amelia didn't last long; and for Martha and Babette, Christmastime was always one the most busy times at the hotel. This evening, Babette had invited Martha to have dinner with her and Amelia in their new flat. After a delicious meal, Amelia excused herself and went to her room. When she returned, she was wearing a new black and white bikini.

"Looks good on you, Amelia!" Martha congratulated her friend. "It's a pity that you have to wait until summer until you can go to the beach."

"Actually, I hoped you could help me... us with this. We thought about a short holiday to the beach." Amelia explained.

"I'm sorry, but Babette and I have to go to work tomorrow. And don't you have nightschool again?" Martha replied.

"We've covered that already." Babette replied. "How about a place where time runs a bit different? A nice beach with warm weather? You can come along if you want, Martha."

"Exactly, but a place where we are not constantly harassed by horny guys." Amelia added.

Babette raised her eyebrow. "Are you sure about that?"

"Actually, that sounds like a good idea." Martha said. "If you wish so, I'll teleport us to such a place at once."

"Teleport?" Amelia asked. "Haven't you forgotten somthing?"

"Right... That wish you made, Amelia. No problem, I'll open a portal, then." Martha answered.

"Good. I'll change into my bathing suit and you make the wish, Amelia." Babette said and left for her room.

Amelia took Martha's lamp. "Martha, I wish that you open a portal to a wonderful beach, where we can spend the next three days without being missed at school or our jobs and where no horny guys will constantly chase us."

"You wish is granted!" Martha said and blinked. A portal formed. A few minutes later, Babette returned wearing a bikini, too. The three friends were off on their holiday.


When the three girls stepped through the portal, they found themselves on a beautiful beach with crystal clear water, white sand and a palm grove behind them. Further inland, there were some mountains. They also saw the domes of some kind of arabian palace in the distance. The beach was crowded by several women. Many of them wore bikinis and other bathing suits. But strangely, there were several kinds of mermaids lying on the beach, too: Normal mermaids with fish tails, but also dolphin mermaids and even octopus mermaids with many tentacles instead of legs and feet. To Martha's surprise, there were genies too. Many women had jewels in their navels from which the smoke tails of genies came, with the genies floating above the women. The most astonishing fact was that all women, mermaids, and genies were deep asleep.

"Where did you take us, Martha?" Amelia asked.

"I'm not sure. You wished for a beach where you can spend three days without being missed and where no horny guys would chase after you. I assume that this is some kind of parallel world. Most likely, time will go faster here; so for three days HERE, I guess only one day will pass in our world. And we have a beach and I see no men at all. I'd say your wish has been granted!" Martha explained.

Babette placed her towel on the sand and opened her bag. "Who cares? Let's settle down, relax and get a nice tan! Amelia, will you rub me with sunblock?"

"Sure!" said Amelia, and started to rub the sunblock onto Babette's back.

Meanwhile, Martha had awakened a sleeping octopus-mermaid. "Hello! My name is Martha and I and my friends just arrived here. We are wondering what is going on?"

"Yawn!" The mermaid stretched her arms. "Welcome to the island of dreams. My name is Darleena. Don't worry, here you are safe. You can stay here as long as you want, have a nice nap or relax otherwise. And you won't be harassed by anything, since this place is well guarded."

"Who's protecting this place?"

"The Golems are the guardians. If you break the peace, you'll face them, but no woman that comes here ever does. And on top are the goddesses, who rule this land.

Meanwhile, Amelia had finished rubbing the sunblock into Babette's skin. "Martha, will you rub me too, please?"

"What has happened to Babette?" Martha turned towards Babette and Amelia. Babette was already lying on her towel, deep asleep.

"She decided to take a nap." Amelia put her hand in front of her mouth. "Yawn! Come on, rub me, so I can take one, too." She laid down and turned on her belly. When Amelia rested her head on her hands, she quickly slipped away into sleep.

Martha violently shook Amelia. "Amelia, you have to wake up. Something's wrong here. I feel tired too, though I don't really want to sleep." She pulled Amelia up. Then Martha tried to wake up Babette,also.

"Letmesleepmartha..." Babette mumbled. She barely opened her eyes but quickly slipped into sleep again.

Martha tried again to waken up Babette. But the only reaction she got was a loud snore. Then Martha saw that Amelia was about to collapse and fall asleep again. She quickly supported Amelia. With Amelia's arm over her shoulder, Martha went over to the sleeping Darleena. She tried to wake up the mermaid again.

"whatdoyouwantnow?" Darleena asked, half asleep.

"Please tell me where I can find the goddesses."

Darleena woke from her slumber. "They live in the palace at the center of the island. Just head for the mountains and you will eventually pass by the palace. Now let me sleep again.

Martha felt that Amelia was getting drowsy again. And she herself felt tired, too. Quickly, Martha dragged Amelia from the beach, leaving Babette and Darleena behind.

TO BE CONTINUED...

Part 2: hippo2.deviantart.com/art/Drea…
Part 3: hippo2.deviantart.com/art/Drea…
Part 4: hippo2.deviantart.com/art/Drea…
Part 5: hippo2.deviantart.com/art/Drea…
Part 6A: Accept Babettes choice. hippo2.deviantart.com/art/Drea…
Part 6B: Try to rescue Babette. hippo2.deviantart.com/art/Drea…

Proofreading by :iconjorrun:

The story is set in the World of SSU by :iconnayzor: and :iconemperornortonii:


Babette's Story


If you want to follow Babette's story, go here: Story nayzor.deviantart.com/art/Babe… Comic fav.me/d6dupt2
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RalphThebandit Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
Interesting end game your writing here,very nive.
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hippo2 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
Better wait. The first decision will be comming.
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GenreChallenger Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
And here I thought the endgame was about to start. I'm not complaining though. This looks promising.
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hippo2 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
It has started. During the next four stories, you will have to make one desicion per story. Sometimes, this desicion is at the end, sometimes, it's earlier in the story. When all stories are finished, your desicion will determine the fate of Martha and the others.

Don't worry, there are still four stories comming, each story with at least four parts, some with more.
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EmperorNortonII Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Glad you uploaded this again. I had trouble seeing the picture last night!
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hippo2 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
No problem.
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EmperorNortonII Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
I notice you used a few poses from SSU bios!
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hippo2 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
Many of the characters in the next chapters are based on pictures from SSU. I hope you don't mind.
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EmperorNortonII Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Not at all, I'm flattered! :D
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Agent505 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Professional Writer
Paradise... paradise lost... paradise disrupted... ah, how good stories start :)
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hippo2 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
It may look like paradise, but this place is strange in many ways. The girls will soon meet other inhabitants too.
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Agent505 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Professional Writer
Noted :)
I like this inclusion of mermaids, though I wonder why the one in the pic has a huge belly. (Don't need to know why if its a reason that is some kind of fetish.)
As with the other stories, I'm guessing this one will be awesome.
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hippo2 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
The belly is huge because she's pregnant. You have a lot of pregnant persons in SSU. Propably some kind of a fetish on :iconnayzor: and :iconemperornortonii: 's part.
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EmperorNortonII Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Pregnancy is more *Nayzor's fetish than mine, I should say.
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hippo2 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
Sorry, I didn't know that. I always wondered about the many pregnants in the SSU pictures too.
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EmperorNortonII Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
I just put some pregnant females in because he seemed to like them so much. I do kind of like pregnancy, just not as much as him.
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hippo2 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
I used pregnants once in my Martha stories for storytelling reasons before, but it doesn't give me the thrill a fetish would do. So I added them to the pictures because pregnants are quite prominent in SSU. But that's it.
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Agent505 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Professional Writer
:)
Okay.
(I see a lot of images like that where some genies are always preggers, and it has a tendancy to get old at times.)
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hippo2 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
:iconnayzor: and :iconemperornortonii: always add pregnant characters to their pictures. So I added some too, because it seems to be typical for their world, not because I'm into that kind of fetish. There will be more preggo characters in the next chapters to come.
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Agent505 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Professional Writer
I guess if it fits their universe - like you say, I'm not into that either.
Oh well. At least there are mermaids.
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Nayzor Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
Thanks are there any mermaid races you'd like?
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hippo2 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
I neither in it. But as you say, if it fits their universe, I will add them.
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Nayzor Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
This is a great beginning!
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hippo2 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
Glad you like it. You world of SSU is a funny place to draw. Though it took me a lot of time to do these pictures. I think it was worth it.
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DanStanding Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
Oh, this could be bad...
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hippo2 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
There are still two girls left. This game can go on a bit...
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