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Deadly Sweetness - Part 3 by hippo2 Deadly Sweetness - Part 3 by hippo2
The next morning, Martha was once more summoned by Alexis. “How is it going?” she asked her mistress.

”Not so bad. I found a toy for the night at the club. But there are still some men who resist me. Take that receptionist, for example.”

”David? He has a girlfriend. Keep your hands away from him.” Martha hissed.

”That’s not the proper tone for a genie!” Alexis scolded.

Even though Martha felt her anger rise, she felt herself forced to compel. “Yes, Mistress!” she said and bowed.

”Excellent. Let’s see how I will seduce all these other men as well. I know you can’t change their minds, but maybe you can change me so they will be interested?”

”What shall I do? Give you an even sexier body?” Martha proposed.

”Oh no! You might turn me into the caricature of an oversexed bimbo. I have a better idea.” Alexis took a deep breath. “Animals use smells and pheromones to send sexual signals to their partners. And deep inside, men are just animals. So, can you let me constantly emanate pheromones, which makes all men sexually interested in me?”

”Like a bitch in heat?” Martha said.

”Ye… er, like that. But don’t let me act like the proverbial bitch. And don’t turn me into one. That would be my second wish.”

”Aren’t you one already?” Martha continued to tease. “Your wish is granted.” Martha blinked.

At first, nothing seemed to happen to Alexis. But when she walked over to the reception, every man turned his head after her. Alexis strutted straight over to David.

”How can I … help … you … Miss.” David asked, becoming more and more entranced.

”When does your shift end today?”


“At 5 pm.” Meanwhile, David had only eyes for Alexis.

”Perfect! I’ll meet you at 5 pm in the lobby, and then we hit the city.” Then Alexis left the hotel.

Martha rushed to David. “Hey, David. Snap out of it!”

”What do you mean? I think I found the perfect woman.” David answered.

”What about Amelia? And besides, we are not allowed to have dates with our patrons.” Martha said.

”Amelia? She’s nothing compared to Alexis. And I don’t care about the rules.” David replied.

Martha blinked and disappeared. She felt terrible. Because of her magic, David might break up with Amelia. She never intended something like that to happen. But she was forced to grant that wish. Now, there was only one person left who could help her.


Amelia was cleaning a room on the second floor, when Martha reappeared in the room.


“Hello Amelia, can we talk a bit?” Martha sounded very sad.

”Sure, Martha. Is something wrong?” Both women sat down on the bed.

”Amelia, I did something terrible. Because of my magic, David is under the control of another woman. I’m so sorry!” Martha sobbed.

Amelia stayed surprisingly calm. ”Did the other woman wish for this?” Martha nodded.
”Don’t worry.” Amelia put her hand on Martha’s shoulder. “I know that you are forced to grant those wishes. But you can grant me some wishes, too. Now tell me what has happened.”

When Martha had finished the story, Amelia put on a determined face. “I’ll fight for David. I might resort to your magic, Martha, but first, I’ll try something. You said it’s the woman’s smell that entranced David? Let’s see how he reacts to my smell.”


David was bored, when suddenly, the elevator opened. Amelia and Martha, now in her working attire, stepped into the reception. Amelia headed straight for him. The young man gave Amelia a puzzled look. A part of him felt guilty at the sight of his girlfriend. “Hello Amelia, what brings you here?”

”I was missing you and wanted to see you.” Amelia leaned on the reception desk and looked David in the eyes. She smiled, exposing her frontal teeth in the process. “Did you miss me too?”

”I… I…” David gulped. He desperately tried to break up with Amelia, but strangely, he felt more attracted to Amelia by the minute.

”Shhh!” Amelia put her finger on David’s mouth. She leaned over and kissed him on the lips. “Martha told me everything about you and this woman.”

”You know?” David’s feelings were in turmoil.

”Martha granted that woman a wish that made it nearly impossible for you to resist her.” Amelia caressed David’s cheek. She slid her hand over David’s nose. David took a deep breath. His eyes opened as if he awoke form a sleep.
”I’m not angry with you, David. If you decide right now that you will stay with me. Otherwise, we are done.”

”Amelia, please forgive me. You are the most important woman to me. I want to be with you.” He took her hand and kissed it.


Amelia felt him inhale through his nose. She knew she had David back. ”I have to go back to work now. But I’ll be with you, when your shift is over.”

”How about we go out for lunch?” David proposed.

”Sure, I’d love to. See you during lunch break.” Amelia gave David a smile. Then she returned to the elevator.


Inside the elevator, Martha waited for Amelia. “What did you just do?”

”Simple! I signalled David with my own smell that I want him. Animals use their smell to communicate. Humans have forgotten how to do it. But it still works with humans, too. Even if I’m human now, I still know about these things. And it worked. Let’s hope David will keep his word this evening.”

Martha nodded. “I’m glad your plan worked. But I’m afraid Alexis won’t give up so easy. She still has one wish left.”

”Then you have to twist that wish so she can never take David away from me. You are the genie here, Martha!” Amelia never sounded so determined before.

”Don’t worry, Amelia. I will.” When the elevator doors opened again, Martha bid Amelia farewell. Then she disappeared with a blink.

TO BE CONTINUED...

Part 1: hippo2.deviantart.com/art/Dead…
Part 2: hippo2.deviantart.com/art/Dead…

Part 4: hippo2.deviantart.com/art/Dead…

Proofreading by :iconjorrun:
Based on an idea by :icondrangdmisc:
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DanStanding Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012
Anticipation!
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kaaslave Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012
Poor Martha! :(
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kaaslave Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012
Oh, wait...she's smiling. :P
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GenreChallenger Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This won't end well for Alexis.
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hippo2 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012
Yup! She'll be really messed up.
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GenreChallenger Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Trying to force a genie to use magic to help you do something she would hate to see you do would be like trying to make a shark drown in water. It won't work, and you'll just end up being messed up by the shark.
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jmansword Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012
actually you can make a shark drown they have to constantly be moving in order to breath so if you make it stop swimming it will drown
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GenreChallenger Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I didn't know that.
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jmansword Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012
not many people do i only learned it recently
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GenreChallenger Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Still, an interesting fact.
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hippo2 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012
Since I can't decide on the ending, I've done two versions too choose.
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GenreChallenger Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sure you'll figure it out.
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EmperorNortonII Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
I like how you designed the kiss!
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hippo2 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012
Thank you lot.
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Jorrun Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012
I love when Marta is FORCED to be submissive!
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hippo2 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012
We know this will only make her angry. And then, she will twist the last wish.
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P-z-p-Z Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Alexis is denied, for now.
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hippo2 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012
Yup. But there's still one wish left. Let's see how Martha will deal with the situation.
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P-z-p-Z Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah.
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