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Scroll of Destiny

By HikerAngel
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The story is now live on Amazon and available for purchase. You can read it for free if you have Kindle Unlimited or a Kindle device from the Kindle Lending Library.

www.amazon.com/dp/B085QKP7KJ

(cover by Larafan)
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Just finished reading this and have to say, this is probably your best work yet. There were a few typos and wrong or switched names, but about average for kindle unlimited. The power growth was nicely paced for the length of the book. I liked the personalities. And I especially liked that Destiny did things with the powers. Beat up some thugs, broke some furnishings, leapt over giant trash heaps in single bounds. The scroll twisting Vaughn's doubts into the wish was a nice touch as was the warring between Destiny and the scroll's corruption. So, sequel? Maybe the scroll could take on a life of its own and super powered Destiny would have to square off against an ancient evil in a super hot, super strong body. Idk, but that's where my mind went when I was done reading.
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Good suggestions! Glad you liked it! Please keep in mind that I only wrote half. Much of the credit should also go to my co-author Larafan. A sequel is possible, but the next books to hit Amazon will be: 1. Control. 2. Galatea 3. In a Class of Her Own 1-5. :)

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Thanks HikerAngel. Nice to read the a story where power did not corrupt. As usual, solid writing. Could really get into the characters and picture what was going on. Hate to say it, though, some typos. Easily overlooked as we're all just Hobbyists.

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Forgot to say, was the ending somewhat of a cliffhanger? She makes a wish and scroll is gone, but no look into the outcome.

mpacka0103's avatar

I think the most I saw is fixes in names. For instance, Dan was used once for Vaughn. Sometimes the wrong name was used, like Destiny for Tim, don't remember all the occasions.

HikerAngel's avatar

Oh really? I'll try to run back through and catch more, then update. Thanks for letting me know. I really need to hire a professional editor... maybe I'll be able to afford it if the book does well... ;)

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