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Journal Entry: Mon Oct 10, 2011, 4:22 PM


EDIT: Added my most recent Hawke

Yes you! The one reading this!

Hopefully the smexy Fenris header caught your attention and though "Oh, she likes Dragon Age!" BECAUSE THAT'S WHAT I NEED YOU FOR!

I'm writing a series of short, all based around Dragon Age.

I need ideas for some short stories, similar to the folder you can find in my gallery called "Dragon Age". Questions are the best way for me to write.

Below are my characters for you to use by name, if you so choose. I know the last names, so that works too *nods*-

Raine Tabris, the city elf rogue- Romances Alistair, then sticks with Zevran

Silk Cousland, the human noble warrior- Romances Alistair

Leale Surana, the elven mage- Romances Alistair

Sydony Mahariel, the dalish rogue- Romances Zevran, but her true love is Fenris (See my fic Elven Meet)

Adela Hakwe, the forcemage/spirit healer mage- Rivalmances Fenris. Personality type is mostly snarky/charming/sarcastic, but she'll get bitchy if need be. She also absolutely hates her brother, since he joined the templars. Kept Anders alive, though she hated him after the fact. They were best friends before.

Artemis Hawke, the dual bladed rogue- Rivalmances Fenris, but when he leaves, she runs into Anders' arms. Personality type is mostly agreeable with a few aggressive and some sarcasm to piss off Fenris and confuse Merrill. Best friends with Varric. Wishes she had more time with her sister, but is happy Bethany is doing good with the wardens.

Luna Hawke, the sword and shield warrior- Rivalmances Anders. Very aggressive and to the point. Sided with the templars until Anders made the chantry go boom. Then she realized he was, after all that, right. Best friends with Isabela; travels with her for a while until Isabela decided Anders and Luna needed to have their own life. Only soft to people when asked about her family (all deceased).

Moira Hawke, the spirit healer/force mage- Romances Isabela. Very sarcastic with those she loves, normally nice to those she cares about. Total bitch to Fenris and almost sells him to Danarius, but Varric stops her. Kept Anders alive, but sent him away, since she couldn't believe he would lie to her like that.

Cormella Hawke, the Assassin/Duelist bow rogue- Romances Fenris. Extremely sarcastic, even when it's inappropriate. As soon as Bethany ended up in the circle and enjoyed it, decided mages needed to be put into the circle. Had a soft spot for Anders, even though they bitched at each other all the time, so she killed him when he asked. Becomes probably one of the worst Viscounts ever, since she just passed everything off to Cullen or Aveline or consulted Fenris. When she heard about an assassination plot, she took off to to Starkhaven to help Sebastian retake the throne. Only Fenris, Sebastian and Varric (her best friend) know where she is.

Andromeda Hawke, the Reaver/Templar two handed warrior- Romances Merrill. Very sweet to those that agree with her, but bitches at Fenris and Sebastian to the point of anger from them. Best friends with Isabela, and ends up traveling with her for a very long time, since her and Merrill get along so well. Merrill and Andromeda has dissappeared, though, and Isabela is afraid they've died.

Nike Hawke, the Spirit Healer/Blood Mage- Rivalmances Sebastian. Possibly the worst mage ever. Is a complete hypocrite when it comes to anything involving the circle and mages. Believes that she is the only mage out there with a vision, and all the others belong in the circle. Is aggressive to everyone except Fenris, since they're best friends. Kills Anders and sides with the Templars in the end, making every single mage out there hate her, except for oblivious Merrill. Returns to Starkhaven with Sebastian a short time after they got married, since she was bored.

Thank you for ALL your feedback!

ALSO, I have the right to not want to write anything. Because of this, I encourage you to send in three or four ideas. Thank you very much!


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DeathToMonkey Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist
I'm writing dragon age fanfiction to! Mines called The Birth of a Demon and is based inside the circle of magi. It will have charters like Anders. I don't know if it will help but you can take a look at it and get some ideas. If you like it, I will help you as much as possible. :)
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AvA-PD Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
If you're up for a challenge, write about one of your OCs having an awkward crush on Sten or Oghren.
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HikariTheNinja Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my God, YES xD SO doing that!
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Comic-Ninja-Whoot Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I think I have some.

What if Alistiar completed his Templar trianing instead of joining the Wardens and then met Leale?

What if Silk had been gone when Howe attacked and Never became a Warden?

What if Savie met and romanced Fenris?

What if Eri met Savie?

Did I do well? :la: Do you think you'll do any of them?
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HikariTheNinja Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I really really like that first one o.o And Silk as a non-warden... Political marriage time >D As for the dwarf ones, I'll have to keep it in mind when I do those characters. I have no idea how they're going to act, but I'll make sure to remember them *nods*

Thank you so much! If you have any friends who are DA fans, it'd be awesome if you told them!
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Comic-Ninja-Whoot Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I do have a few. Mainly everyone I watch is a da fan actually. I'll tell them about it tomorrow because unfortunately it's almost 12 in the morning here. But I will defiantly say something. I'm glad you liked my suggestions though. :iconlaspinplz:
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HikariTheNinja Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, it was almost midnight here to when you posted that! So you're a north west person? And of course I do 8D I'll get started on the one about Silk first thing, since I have no clue what the other characters look like xD
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Comic-Ninja-Whoot Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Sort of. I'm in California. That's northwest right. I think so. I'm just so used to people saying southern California that I dont know north from south. But yes north or the equater. I look forward to seeing what you do with it. Muses be with you. :D
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HikariTheNinja Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
That west, yeah, sorry xD I always forget to drop the north part when talking to people. I live in Oregon, so to me everything up here is the northwest xD
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Comic-Ninja-Whoot Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
That makes sence. California sucks. Just so you know. It's so hot.
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HikariTheNinja Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I visit there quite a lot. My family is full of disney fanatics, so I've been to Disneyland seven times as well as San Fran about six times... I have family in Monte Ray bay. That place is GORGEOUS
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Fulcrumisthebomb Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey there, I'd really like to help out, but could I ask for some clarification?

I read your journal twice (in some places, three times), but I couldn't quite get what you're asking our help FOR. Are you wanting plot bunny ideas? Are you wanting character development ideas? Are you wanting character names, origins, etc?

I'm sorry if you addressed that, and I'm just thick. ^^; I just don't quite know what you're asking FOR.

Lemme know, and hopefully I can help out! Good luck!
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HikariTheNinja Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It was probably unclear, that's how I write non-formal stuff >.>

...plot bunny?

Just plot ideas, I guess. I saw someone on fanfiction did that, where people gave her a little prompt, though most were smut requests... like one was what would happen if Zevran kept his loyalty to the Crows even after he was in a relationship with Tabris? Stuff like that. Sorry, I gave a little too much info... thank you for telling me, I'll fix it now!
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Fulcrumisthebomb Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh! Okay! I get it. I'm sorry, sometimes I can be rather thick. XDDD

Prompts are fun! Very, very fun. :heart:
Can't have too much information- no such thing exists! (Well, not for me. See the aforementioned 'thick' comment. XD)

Hmm. I will give this some thought, and hopefully get back to you with some prompts/ideas!
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HikariTheNinja Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! And if you know other Dragon Age fans, I just ran into a huge brick wall of writers block, so I could really use the help!
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Fulcrumisthebomb Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oooh~ Will do!
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