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Call me that one more time

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Twelve Forever 
www.youtube.com/watch?v=AXlmB0…

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The art style of this pilot was absolutely awesome. 
The characters are nice, and omygod the "butt witch's" voice tho 

knowing this is a pilot, there is still lots I would add or fix to the story 
(its quite a lot like Peter Pan) 
I want to know exactly what Party Island is? Is it a subconscious dreamworld that Twelve can physically access with her friend? 
and who the hell is the "butt witch" and what is her real name? was she created by Twelve? Is she the subconscious part of Twelve's mind that wants to ease her into growing up because she knows she has to one day? 

I like the villain's personality a bit and when she goes into that monster form near the end I see potential for something great, but I'm tired of villains uselessly playing around with the protagonists. I want them to have a goal besides just playing around and being the thing that SLOWLY causes character development in the protagonist because they point out all the flaws in that character. 

There's still a few other things I'd like to know or would kinda add/fix, but its a pilot, and I'm sure they'd do that later. 

There's no news about it becoming a tv show, but if anyone is interested, maybe you can convince Cartoon Network to make it into a show? 
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horaciosi's avatar
The witch's voice actor is called Matt Berry, BTW.
Ghostpaint1's avatar
I don't know what this is, but I love it!
CircusWard's avatar
this show though
artist-GJ's avatar
thank you for exposing me to this i love this show already
DeadCobra's avatar
Quite good
Its a interesting looking cartoon but i don't think it will be to popular
NitemareLuffy's avatar
I'd be willing to see this if this became a show. Also I think party island is a place made up with her imagination that she can somehow physically access. However, I'm curious how the "butt witch" came to be. Hopefully that'll be answered some day
teahouse3's avatar
!!!! OH MY GOSH YES THIS IS THE BEST 
BUTT LADY IS MY WIFE SCREAMS 

ALSO YOUR STYLE IS SUPER DUPER COOL THIS LOOKS SUPER AMAZING YEAAA

SO PUMPED FOR THIS TO BECOME A SHOW !!!!!!!!!
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