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.Arphids' bases. by Hetiru .Arphids' bases. by Hetiru
One of banners I made for Tapastic. I know I'm almost dead there and have never been active since Inkblazers finished it's existing, but well.. from this year I'm going to give it a life and post my "Gooseberry" manga. But first I should finish my another oneshot-project ^^
Thank you so much to my friend E-X-P-I-E for helping me out with some corrections ;w;
 

If you want to see another banners or read stories I already have, please, follow the link 



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Project: Gooseberry
Program: Paint Tool SAI, Adobe Photoshop CS6, Clip Studio Paint EX
Tablet: line: Cintiq 27 QHD, color: Wacom Intuos Pen Small
Time: 2,5 days
Date: January 16-18 (2016)
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.The hottest day of August. by Hetiru  .Chain. by Hetiru 

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This is a really nice piece, and you never fail to disappoint me. The colors are really lovely, and the shading is excellent. However, I think the boy's face should be a little lighter. It feels like there's really intense lighting behind the girl, so I don't think he would be completely in shadow. His expression seems kind of void of emotion. There's a slight look of apprehension, but it just seems like he's not fearful enough (if that's in character, then it'd be perfect. I don't know your characters too well D:) The angle of his back leg seems kind of off, as well. It's twisting too much towards her, sort of like the socket got stuck and doesn't want to turn. I really love your choice in colors for him, and the green is really defining for me. The girl, on the other hand, looks perfect. Her proportions are spot-on, the energy from the jump is definitely there as well. I'm not entirely sure what's going on (I have yet to read your comic/manga), but the girl's expression is perfect. There's everything in there that I would expect with no background knowledge: She's determined, angry, and ready to make her mind known. The background is amazing. I love what you've done in the back, with the gears and the lights and the streets, but it feels like the perspective isn't accurate. The houses and buildings seem kind of "straight" whereas the streets themselves are "slanted." The background definitely serves it's purpose characteristically, though.
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NamineXblade Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2018
At first i thought it was LadyBug and Chat Noir! :O Amazing work! It reminds me of an alternate version of Paris <3
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Hetiru Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, actually I don't mind you think so x'd But these characters appeared in far behind 2011 and in 2013 I posted one of the first arts with them :'> 
Here: Rain through the eyes of small insects :'''')
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UltimateLazerbot Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2017   Digital Artist
Wow i simply love this picture. :D
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:iconhetiru:
Hetiru Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! <'3333
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UltimateLazerbot Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2017   Digital Artist
You're welcome.
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:iconellie201x:
ellie201x Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This remenber me Miraculous Ladybug, whoa!
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toybonniegurl Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2018  Professional General Artist
same .:*Emoticon*:. Fangirling Marinette 
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:iconellie201x:
ellie201x Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
BUT ARE SO FUCKING AMAZING
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:iconhetiru:
Hetiru Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much)
I was first -3- I created them in 2011 X''''''''''''''''D 
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chihaki Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
holy hel this looks so good and !! the background is insane 
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:iconhetiru:
Hetiru Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much)))) 
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o-DsG-o Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2017  Hobbyist
Wow it's epic!! The background and poses are amazing >v<
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:iconhetiru:
Hetiru Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank youuuu <'3 
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o-DsG-o Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2017  Hobbyist
You're welcome ^v^
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JapanZelda Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow, very nice! The ambiance, the compo, the pose.... Everything is amazing here!!! I love it! Nice job!
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:iconhetiru:
Hetiru Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much! 
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T4iki Featured By Owner Edited Jan 20, 2017  Student General Artist
а почему вы рисуете лайн-арт на одном планшете, а раскрашиваете на другом (просто интересно)? :)
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Hetiru Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Потому что я плохо ориентируюсь в цветах синтика и мне нужно больше времени, чтобы их прочувствовать) 
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Tomonater Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2017  Student Artist
Beautiful 
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:iconhetiru:
Hetiru Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks :') 
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Tomonater Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2017  Student Artist
Bear Emoji-31 (Hello Hi) [V2] 
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ToriCane Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017  Student Digital Artist
gee rlly impressiveee how much time did u spend on thiss wowww
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:iconhetiru:
Hetiru Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I spent 2,5 days :''''D Thank youuuuu <'''3 
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ToriCane Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2017  Student Digital Artist
npp~
woh 0.0 dats some dedication
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SadnessFemBoy2016 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Beautiful and wonderful
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:iconhetiru:
Hetiru Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you ^///^
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SadnessFemBoy2016 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Ur welcome :)
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Pinkoneko Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omg this is so detailed <33
i love their dynamic poses~!
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:iconhetiru:
Hetiru Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank youuuuu <'333333
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candykim0u0 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017  Student General Artist
Amazing I love the work you put into this beautiful drawing
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:iconhetiru:
Hetiru Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much :''') 
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Parallelspace Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome scenery OWO omg !!!!
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:iconhetiru:
Hetiru Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much! <'3333
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:iconao-suzumi:
Ao-Suzumi Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, it's so beautiful! (((o(*°▽°*)o))) Colors are amazing!
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:iconhetiru:
Hetiru Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much))) I had fun working with these colors) 
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InunekoLawliet Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017
Awesome *OO*
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:iconhetiru:
Hetiru Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! <'333333
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