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S.o.O Chapter 5, DELETED SCENE

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Hey everyone! SOoo I've decided to try something.... and perhaps you can tell me, those of you who are followers of "Serpents of Old"..  if it's something you enjoy, and that I should keep doing. But after Chapter 5, Page 7 and before Page 8 I had originally planned to have (it's all written out and everything on the script) a little scene between Hizruk and Gwynn.

The purpose of the scene was to have closure for the bit of tension that was between them a couple days before in the story, and to also express some of Hizruk's inner feelings of guilt for what he had just done. I made the decision that this scene didn't need to be in the comic because the quiet moment they shared on this page served as enough closure in my opinion, aaand I have the whole rest of the chapter to convey Hizruk's inner turmoil X'D.

SOOOO I sadly said goodbye to this scene! It's still 100% canon tho! And really did happen! We just don't see it in the comic...so if you are interested, you can see it here :D. This is essentially how the script looks exactly X'D.... just in a word program and no colors ;P

I have never done anything like this before...so I hope you enjoy it lolol. It would be a shame to waste all that time I spent writing this scene. 

Would you guys be interested in more deleted scenes in the future?
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You know me, I ALWAYS love these kinds of extras!  And sometimes a nice little narrative is easier to share than making a mini comic :)
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Yess absolutely! I liked the scene enough to share it.... but alas, for pacing reasons i decided it was better to skip it x"D.

Thank you so much for reading it prox!
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Hehe. Guess you still need Mama for her fashion sense if nothing else. XD

I loooove this. Thank you for sharing it. I agree that it didn't necessarily have to be in the comic for us to understand that they they are still very much connected. Hehe. I kinda feel like this is Pottermore, or Hizzymore, if you will. An exclusive club for those who want to know more about Serpents. ^_^

And I wonder where he learned the art of keeping secrets...Certainly not from his mother. No, never. Gwynn would never keep a secret. :P :3
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Hehehe yes.. nothing but the best for anyone who cares to know more <33. Thank you so much for reading it, Alston! Its a nice moment between these two, but..yea..had to move things along

LOL! It's funny you should say that about where he gets his secrecy XDDD X3 <3333
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I really love this scene to bits, but recalling that page before the end of chapter 4, I could see why this scene is deleted.

To be honest though, I'm neutral with you posting deleted scenes from the comic, because my reactions would range up from "okay, I can see why this was deleted" to "why the heck was this scene deleted!?"

Actually, there is no in between.
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THank you for your honest opinion it really means a lot! Lol I figure that this scene was a nice scene for character development, but it perhaps dragged the story a bit...... so I guess that's why I wanted to still post it, so the people who read Serpents could still enjoy some deeper character development. 

What u think of this? I always have scenes in mind with people's OCs that don't always get to be in the comic.... whaddya think of me writing and posting THOSE scenes too for you guys to read? :D
With your characters! Some of them may or may not make it in the comic but it may still be fun for you guys :D (I literally just had this idea as i was typing this comment LOL)
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In that case, yes, I'm all up for it. Kinda nice to know that there are scenes that doesn't necessarily make it to the comic but are still considered canon.
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Great idea! I should do this some time. I have way more ideas in my head for Alvery than will ever be in the comic...and, since I'm not my own artist, it would save money, too. XD
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Haha thank you!! Yea I struggled so much with whether or not to delete this scene x"D...it's very rewarding to get to share it--- there's lots of scenes that are great for developing characters but maybe would drag a story too much-- that's what I felt was happening here. 

But at least this way people who read your comic can enjoy deeper character development!
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LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! Thats soooo freaking sweet! SO GLAD WE GOT TO THIS AFTER SCENE! : D I was wondering what happend after than AND NOW I KNOW! yaaay ^^ :heart:
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I'M SO HAPPY YOU LOVE IT!! Hahahaha and glad to finally give you closure! This is greatly encouraging! Now if I need to cut scene in the future, I will still share them with you guys here! <3
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Yep! ^^ If you feels its best to leave scenes out but would have liked to include them then this is a great alternative ^^
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I really like this.. i think it should have been kept :P

and yes more is good./.
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Hahaha thank you! Yea I argued and struggled with myself for a long time about cutting this sscene--- in the end I liked it enough to spend the time putting this together x"D

I wondered if anyone would be disappointed I didn't put it in the comic! Haha thank you for telling me! I'll do more deleted scenes in the future :D
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I love this mother/son relationship!

Gwynn's such a sweetheart mum!:love: Hizruk take good care of your mum and hold onto her. :heart:

Also... Try and learn fashion sense. Lol. Mommy Gwynn shall teach you. XD

(I just love your characters so much.)
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Oohhhhh thank u soo much! That means so much!! *hugs* 
Hizzy should understand how lucky he is to have a momma like her :heart:

Giirl, I hope you've been well! :heart: :cuddle:
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You're very welcome, Serpy~ :glomp:
I know right? He's so very lucky~ :heart: His dad's a troll, so all good things, he must have learned from his momma~ ;p

I have. Just been tired lately is all. ;p
How have you been? It's been a while since we've chatted.
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It really has! I have been pretty tired too---super busy haha

I just wanna tell ya I haven't forgotten about your SoO OCs!! Taya in particular we will be seeing plenty off come Part 2 of this chapter! (she's one of Kaleal's two best buddies hehe <33)

I'm so glad that you're still reading and glad to hear that you've been well!
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Yeah. I could tell. Even if I don't comment much, I still read your comic pages descriptions and such. Guess work has really been tiring you out. I do hope you're doing well though. :aww:

Ah cool~ :D I'll be here waiting then! I'd love to see her role in your comic. You always come up with such unique roles for every character. =p (Cool to hear.) I'm also really interested in learning more about Taya's family. Considering she's related to quite a few of your OCs. :giggle:

Of course I am. Been a fan of SoO ever since I got to meet you. Your comic truly is one of the best I've ever read on here. You never fail to amaze me with any of your pages.
(And Gwynn x Keymen is still my all-time favorite OC couple ever. :love: So I do hope you continue that little comic featuring the cuties.)
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Yeeea full time work and then trying to pump out these 2-1 pages every week does indeed get tiring X'D....buuut it is worth it!

Yess I need to get into the family more! We did already meet that goof brother of hers tho <33-- we'll be seeing a little more of him in this chapter too! :D

Haha it's funny to think that we met because I was doing art trades <3-- I'm so glad! I really love havin' ya as a friend and fan of Serpents! That is SUCH a gracious compliment, I will hold it to my heart always :')

Hehe I know you are excited for "Keynn" (forever thank u for the ship name!)....... you will be glad to know that this current chapter will finally be the moment a lot of people have been waiting for! :dance: :D :D
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Yeah... But with your supporters and friends, I bet everything is worth it.

Yeah. lol. I'm so interested in that family. I bet there will be a lot of diversity in personality. XD I'm really excited for that.

I know right? But your style was so fascinating to me, I couldn't help myself. I had to approach you. ^^ I love having you as a friend too. As well as your comics and characters, including Tawnie and Thunder. (and to think that they only started off as toys.) Your characters are just too well thought out, it's impossible for me to look away.

I'm always excited for "Keynn". It's the OC couple, I hold dear to my heart. Screw that troll husband, Gwynn married. Keymen is her soulmate, even if they aren't together. I believe that one day they'll be together again! Just like it should always be. :love: (No problem. ^^ If you ever need help with other shipping names, you know where to find me. XD) Yassssss!!!! I need to see the moment! I. NEED. IT. SO. BAD!
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o goodness you spoil me so much with ur nice words! Seriously my day has been made by you-- I just can't even :')

I'm blessed to know you and will forever always be glad I did all those art trades because it's so  nice  to have met ya <3. Maybe some day when I am not drowning in things i've committed to lolol..we can do another one for old times sake! Fingers crossed hoping that can happen some time soon!

If ya ever need anything or just wanna chat don't hesitate to message me! <3
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