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comic book page WIP by HEROBOY comic book page WIP by HEROBOY
hey here is a comic page im working . its of my character herob boy . this page is part of an action sequence . it will be about a 10 page story .

if you have any comments i d love to here them -dg
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:iconellocobruja:
Ellocobruja Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2008
awesome
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:iconheroboy:
HEROBOY Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2008  Professional Filmographer
thanks
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:iconnickmockoviak:
NickMockoviak Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2007  Professional Traditional Artist
Aw snap. This is cool beans.
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:iconheroboy:
HEROBOY Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2007  Professional Filmographer
thanks , i love beans -dg
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:iconnickmockoviak:
NickMockoviak Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2007  Professional Traditional Artist
They are good for the heart... :D
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mattcrap Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2007
more of a question, than a comment- and then depending on the answer, it would be comment.

In the last panel HB looks worried and the evil bot guy looks happy. Is that correct?
Is it supposed to be an ineffective hit followed by an "Aww crap." moment?
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mmmmmpig Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
I have often heard that the best moments in a punch to depict in a comic book are either just before contact, or right after contact. I think the last panel would be more dynamic if you showed the action 2 beats after the punch connected.

As it is it is really good, that would just punch (forgive the pun) it up a bit.
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HEROBOY Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2007  Professional Filmographer
i agree with your comment s , with this page i wanted to run with the fact that heroboys landing all his punch,s the following pages will follow the before and after theory .
i hope it will all work out
thanks for the comments . -dg
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Kravenous Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2007
dude this is pretty cool!!!!!!!!!
the only I might suggest is the gutters may need to be a little wider
nice work
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