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Can you

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Look, damn you, I only came here to do a thing.
The night had its moment, its breath
and you, you
had a temper, a tempter and
it was all bare.

A leg, a thin,
a meandering lot full of weeds
round your head and there you go
off that way
barely, still
noticing.

Here, an advice.
untempt your suffering.
mooch off your visions.
wrap your self(es)Vests
a(door)((n))round
simple

Do what comes
is
(not better nor worse)
than(k)

Tear a hole,
meat filled water. Do a thing.
can you.
Here we go again. 
Tear me to pieces. 
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YouInventedMe's avatar
Good to return to and fins this/you here.
hell-on-a-stick's avatar
Same to you, old beastie thou! 
wellwornwings's avatar
Wowowowow!

i love how your words and parenthesis play together.

great piece. 
hell-on-a-stick's avatar
Thank you, wings. Glad to see you’re about!
PennedinWhite's avatar
I missed this, somehow. Shame on me!

This was quite the read, and glad you posted
something! :heart:
hell-on-a-stick's avatar
I appreciate that, thanks much, you there.
RichardLeach's avatar
Hey! Glad you came to do a thing! :ahoy:
Tempting tempers will get you.

This was descriptive.  Nice work!
salshep's avatar
Look, for five damn minutes just let me be happy that you posted something new, orright?

I'll get to the tearing in due course. :)

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