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Dirty Pants - FFM_2010_6

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Birds were chirping outside. In the room it was becoming night:

I'm tired of washing your pants. You need to be more careful when playing. - She yelled, while scrubbing.

Once he left, silence stood there - the birds and his mother too, waiting for him. The night came back, as usual, but he didn't.
This is the story of how a mother lost a child due to a pair of dirty pants.

This was made for a chat prompt for Flash Fiction Month, the theme was "Pants" and we had 20 minutes to do it. I'm going to use it as an entry for day 6: [link]
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Brief and poignant. Perfect.