Claymore: +Badass+

The first thing that jumps out at me in this image is how underexposed all of your armor is, compared to other shots linked in the description - in those I can pick out all of the textures and details, which parts are cloth vs. leather, and so on. But in this image I can't see any of that, you're just wearing a mass of intricately sewn black....stuff. I think more exposure on your armor would really add to this image.

I also might have had each of you do something with your non-dominant hands - brush your hair aside, rest it on the pommel of your massive blade, lean on it, put it on your hip - anything other than leave it hanging at your waist.

Having not read this series - only watched it, and a few years ago at that - I can only assume the two women in the background are secondary/supporting characters. I think I would have placed them closer to Claire and Miria, or at least closer to the top of the stairs. If these pillars extend farther out into a corridor, that might have been neat to shoot in as well.....

I like this background a lot though, for a photoshoot from this particular series.