Milky-Way Mixup: p5-p6

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By this point I'm starting to feel more confident in the dialogue balloons. I don't want to cover up the art, but at the same time, it's important that there's a balance between dialogue/SFX/imagery, and when I first started placing dialogue I felt I was trying as hard as possible to keep these balloons out of the way.

Now I prefer to embrace them and let them lead the eye through the artwork.

As for our damsel, things are starting to get dicey!
It's all downhill from here I'm afraid ._.

Persevere little miss!
~Gear

P.S. Thinking up sound effects is fun.
Splort!