The Mary-Sue Complaints Checklist Index

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Welcome to The Mary-Sue Complaints Checklist!  Got a complaint about a character trait, or a plot device?  Maybe it's more of a writing style pet peeve.  Come on in and read why these specific "traits" aren't necessarily "Mary-Sueish" or "bad writing".  

Before you read any farther, it would probably be best to read my "Mary-Sue: Who is She?" series first before reading any of these because my definition of Mary-Sues are quite different from anything I've read by anyone else.  I'm quite open-minded, so if you have a gorgeous, powerful character with a tragic past, I would accept it without automatically declaring it a Mary-Sue.

These are the chapters I have written or am planning to write.  If I have submitted the subject, I have put links in this index itself, so just hover over the subject you want to read, and click on it.  If you feel I have missed something, by all means, let me know and I'll either add on here, or I'll make a guide for the "Mary-Sue: Who is She?" series.  

  1. "You" P.O.V.s
  2. Clichés and Self-Inserts
  3. Sucked into the Universe
  4. OCs Paired up with Canon Characters
  5. OCs Related to Canon Characters
  6. Controlling All of the Elements
  7. Suddenly or Accidentally Gaining Powers
  8. Having or Gaining Wings
  9. Coming Back to Life
  10. Musical Talents
  11. Having Numerous Hobbies
  12. Knowing Numerous Languages
  13. Youthful Old Gals/Men
  14. "Hot" Only Characters
  15. Multi-Colored Hair
  16. Lack of Scars on Fighters
  17. Inflow of Japanese Characters
  18. Princesses vs. Rebellious Tomboys
  19. Girlish Boys and Macho Girls
  20. Cutters, Druggies, and Alcoholics
  21. Killing Canon Characters
  22. Physical/Emotional/Mental Disabilities/Disorders
  23. Has an Alter Ego/Demon/Angel Inside
  24. Sex as an Outlet (Even for Sexually Abused Characters)
  25. Rule Breaking Genres
  26. OCs with a Canon Character's Name
  27. Characters with Extra Long Hair
  28. "Rare" vs "Impossible"
  29. Beauty, Brains, and Brawn
  30. Sweet Sixteen
  31. Endearing Flaws
  32. Animal Companions
I highly recommend reading my first Mary-Sue guides from the Mary-Sue: Who is She? series before reading any of these. My definition of a Mary-Sue isn’t all about the characters perse, and you would be surprise at how open I am to ideas that are declared an “absolute Mary-Sue trait.” Gorgeous, powerful characters, with sad pasts, I accept it all and wouldn’t call them Mary-Sues.

Anyways, what this checklist is, is just me writing specifically about these so-called “bad writer/Mary-Sue traits” and telling you why it’s OK to write about/with them. With the other guides, I just didn’t have room to be more specific, so I wanted to have another series within the series going. If I think of another guide-worthy idea, I’ll still continue the general guides, but for now I’m taking a (well-deserved) break.

By writing another series of Mary-Sue guides?

. . . I'm weird.

The links to each of the subjects that I have written are in the index. Just hover over whatever you want to read, and if it adds an underline, that means I've submitted it here.

Learning how to develop characters and the story itself isn't something I can just teach you or write a tutorial about, you have to practice that on your own. So this is really just a checklist.
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Hmm...My char has an unnatural hair color though I wasn't dyed or anything its more of a representation for my character's personality does that make her a Mary sue?