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I find this difficult to evaluate in isolation from the original artwork which I can't help referring to. This rework has certainly ach...

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2nd-Sex-War-1
Having been completely defeated by the all-female army of the Federation of Matriarch States (FMS), the forces of the Patriarchy had no choice but to surrender to the women who had conquered them.  However, the macho arrogance of the Patriarch government eventually refused to accept this state of female supremacy and plotted revenge.
On a bright spring morning, at dawn, they launched a full scale surprise attack against the FMS. Spearheaded by heavy armour they attempted to cross an obscure frontier bridge into Matriarch territory.  This frontier post was held by just three women; Sgt. Adelle Laroche with Privates Martine Bouvier and Marie Gaudet.  Sgt Laroche’s first shot with the anti-tank gun stopped the lead tank in it’s tracks.  Unable to go around the destroyed vehicle on the narrow bridge, the following armour was forced to halt. With grim determination the male infantry came forward on each side of the bridge. There they were walked into a storm of automatic gunfire from the three female defenders. As the men came on they were slaughtered by the dozen and their advance faltered then ceased. Things had gone badly for the Patriarchy; two thousand of their soldiers plus tanks had been defeated by just three infantry-women on the first day of the 2nd war of the sexes.
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I find this difficult to evaluate in isolation from the original artwork which I can't help referring to. This rework has certainly achieved it's aim in becoming darker and captures the atmosphere of a gloomy prison cell very well. There also seems to be a sense of impending doom there which I find unsettling and maybe that's the point. There is almost a halo of darkness around the edges of the image which is echoed by the shadows of and on the figures.

However, for me, I think the heavier and darker style of this rework have inevitably eliminated the qualities of the elegance and detail of the original. Qualities that I usually associate with this artist's work. For example the area top right showing the hands of the Officer tying the strap across Reeves' back has been lost. I also find that the femininity, elegance and sharpness of the lady officers which, for me, is an integral quality of the original has been blunted. I'm thinking as I write this and refer back and forth to both artworks, that perhaps something midway between them may work better for a pulp fiction style.
Samurai-Lady
I thought I had posted all my old pen & ink drawings but just discovered this one. In fact it was my first effort to produce something suitable for publication but was rejected by a fetish magazine. I did a bit of research on Samurai swords and armour for it.
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Clumsy-maid
Here is the last of my old pen & ink drawings, which I don't think was ever published before. Although, it was intended for a fetish magazine letters page. I used photo reference when drawing the maid because I couldn't draw such a beautiful butt from memory. :D (Big Grin)  I don't usually draw women in a submissive role but, as this is femdom on fem, I thought it was acceptable.
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One other thing. I do not usually do requests as I find little enough time to produce my own work.

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:iconjuli101a:
juli101a Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2018
Thank you Harry for adding more of my photos to your "Favorites"!  Much appreciated.
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Harry-Cake Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2018
Your welcome Julia. :) (Smile) 
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DarkDeliciousDevil Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2018  New Deviant Hobbyist Writer
thx for even more faves!!!
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Harry-Cake Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2018
My pleasure. :) (Smile) 
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DarkDeliciousDevil Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2018  New Deviant Hobbyist Writer
thx for the fave Harry ... hope all is better now
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Harry-Cake Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2018
You are welcome. :) (Smile)  I love the story and will leave a comment soon. ;) (Wink) 
"hope all is better now"? Did I miss something? :-? (Confused) 
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DarkDeliciousDevil Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2018  New Deviant Hobbyist Writer
I thought you had some artist probs and were off DA temporarily
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Harry-Cake Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2018
Everything is fine but thank you for asking. Hug 
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DarkDeliciousDevil Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2018  New Deviant Hobbyist Writer
and thank you for watching over me :) (Smile) :) (Smile) :) (Smile) 
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Harry-Cake Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2018
My pleasure. :) (Smile) 
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