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…It’s something more than that
-Sublte
Taken like a pill to subdue the franticness
…It’s something  just like that
-Scheduled
Met right on time to suspend my disbelief
…It’s based on made up fact
-Skeptical
A dream world I drift into hiding myself again
…It’s listing all the things I lack
-Surreal
Judge and jury of my lifetime, enemy still a friend


I’m collapsing under the weight
Always the strong one, always so strong but
I’m submitting to this fate
My pulse is a song, it’s made up-sing along


Dragging.    My feet.   
               Always dragging.  Like sleep.   
  Flagging.  Down help.
I’m in distress. This is my SOS.
                                                 Snuff the candle out.
im sleepy
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harlita Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2007
why didn't anyone tell me I spelled subtle wrong !?

gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!! *deflates*

haha
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moejo Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
this is so personal and i dont think anything i can type will do it justice. the final line is so distressing just...gah, you know?

wonderful. you need to post more often love :heart:
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xSwEetxBlAsPheMyx Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2007
wow i really i like this. at first i was busy trying to work out what you were writing about, and enjoying the repeated use of s. i never figured out what you were describing but to me it was walking to meet a good friend to make an apology i didn't deserve to be accepted.
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harlita Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2007
*blushes*
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xSwEetxBlAsPheMyx Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2007
tehe :giggle: i didn't mean to embarass you
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