In no means am I an awesome story teller. But the people around me made me realize, everyone makes up stories in their head. they have that one story they spend years thinking about. but it's all in their head. you think you're the only one that does this but actually, a lot of people do. they have no intention to publish it and most people are somewhat embarrassed and think their story is dumb. in fact, I'd be embarrassed to show most people I know in real life my stories. I think that they would think I'm dumb and weird. What is it about online anonymity that makes me want people to read it and talk about it? as far as I know, only 2 people
info: 1000 points for a full color manga style illustration with background
1000 for semi realistic illustration
500 for just character, no background
if you have special requests, let me know and I can give you a bid. I also accept stuff like amazon gift cards equivalent to the points value or paypal. I also do art trades. virtual hugs to anyone who decides to help out this college kid trying to survive :)
I'll make it worth the price, trust me :)
I made some pretty important changes to chapter 2 and wrote chapter 3. critique on these drafts would be really really awesome! this story has been in my head for a long time and it'd be nice to have somebody to talk about it with. hopefully chp. 3 is not too short for the wait, but yeah,.. don't worry, chapter 4 should come out soon, but first, i need your input so problems can be fixed early on.
for those of you that are new, chp. 1 is here: http://happylilsquirrel.deviantart.com/journal/Revised-chp-1-draft-still-could-use-criticism-329684821
-chapter 2 "Unexpected Encounters"
(approx. 100 years later)
Shin (now all grown up into a "yo
Today, I will feature my brother GiantCaliber. He just recently joined dA (after months of me telling him to get one) and still has no deviations posted yet. However, I would like to highly encourage you to read his story and critique it for him because being new, he doesn't have any connections to get the word out. Being the big sister, I want to do whatever I can to help.
He is writing a story and here is the link to chapter 1:
I swear, the way he does things is so similar to me and I don't think he's read my past journals when I posted my chapters. FYI I still am working on my chapters, just
did I ever tell you how I got left behind in Hawaii after my family moved back to Japan so I could finish the semester? well, now I'm in Arizona. it's really fun and it feels like Christmas for once! it's actually quite chilly. of course, I'm working on some art and coloring my friend's lineart and stuff on spare time.
so one of the awesome things that happened was finally meeting silvershadowhedgehog in real life. She is one of my cousin's best friends and if you think she is cool on dA, she is way cooler in person. oh, and btw, she is an amazing artist with a distinct style and i urge you to go support her gallery http://silvershadowhdgeh