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Sun rise from the sea
Its tranquil waves comfort me
Our world disappears
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Guest Spotlight: Faternal Siblings
[This story is not written by me. It was written by my friend MCS who wanted to try his hand at writing. So be sure to leave a comment below on what you think of the story!]
"Okay, so factoring in the online order promo code and all of these your total comes to seven dollars and thirty two cents. Huh." The delivery boy looked at his tablet, then the boy near his age holding the delivery: a stack of pizza boxes in his hands and a sheepish grin on his face. His concerns quickly disappeared as he was handed a twenty dollar bill and told to keep the change. "So uh, you prepping for a party or something?" he asked, trying to politely broach why this kid was buying a day's salary in pizza and clipping enough coupons to pay for a tenth of it.
"Oh, that, uh, well, most of it isn't for me, yeah." the boy answered, chuckling nervously before stepping back inside his doorway, arms too full to wave back to the delivery boy. He kicked the door closed, leaned against it and sighed. Robin wasn't
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The Ruler of Brawlers Reunion - Part 13
The two teams take their places at they prepare for the battle.
Gallade: Pick your members and let’s get started!
Shiro: I’ll go first.
Lacey: Let’s see how fast you are against me, electric lion.
Gallade: Begin!
Shiro: *uses Charge*
Lacey: *uses Mud Shot*
Shiro: *dodges it and uses Thunder Fang*
Lacey: *gets hit* AHHH!
Shiro: Is that fast enough for you?
Lacey: Heh, you’re not bad. Can you handle this heat? *uses Pyro Ball*
Shiro: *counters it with Crunch*
The attacks create a huge cloud of smoke.
George: Wow. Shiro’s really holding his own out there.
Loren: Uh-huh. He wasn’t kidding when he said he was
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Keeping Busy
The silence was broken by a strange rumbling.
“Hm... Guess we're hungry again...”
Hazel realized as she looked down at her rounded stomach. She was now about six months deep into her pregnancy, and she couldn't have been happier. She'd waited years for her shot at motherhood, and now that she had her chance, she wanted everything to be perfect. Thankfully, everything up to that point had gone rather smoothly. Her baby was growing at a steady rate, pushing her stomach out further, and making her feel heavier. The weight never bothered her, however. She was just happy to be experiencing this in her lifetime
Possibly the only thing more noticeable than the weight was the strange, spontaneous cravings that she would experience. Sometimes, she would crave the weirdest things, like vanilla ice cream with caramel and fried pickles. Other times, it was something simple, like a bowl of pretzels and a nice glass of cool water.
Today, she was thinking she could combine another one of her
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Meaningful haikus are hard to write. Overall, I like that this one has a clear emotion/vibe to it.
One thing I'd like to mention is that I'm not sure how the last line functions in relation to the poem as a whole. We start off with imagery of the sun rising over a body of water, then transition to a loss of imagery, which I assume is meant to symbolize getting lost in the imagery. I don't feel that it accomplishes this task well; it's too heavily supported by what you know the poem is meant to mean, not by what is actually going on in the poem itself.
Despite that, I personally enjoyed the haiku and think that you did a good job.