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i still think it could use a bit more pollishing, but im feeling too down and depressed today to do so.
so, next time, maybe.

i must say, i am extremely thankfull to people with stock accounts, without them, half my works wouldnt be NEAR as good as they are, using stock as reference is great, sometimes, helps unblock things and details we know to be missing but not where.

commens and +fav's are always appreciated, and comments will be answered.

ty for vewing, enjoy, and take a look at my galery if you have the time ;)
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Hey there, decided to drop a critique, my first one...
Well ill try and translate from the comment i was going to originally post in portuguese.
You seem to have forgotten about shading the rest of the cloth and not just the folds, this is important otherwise you'll have a big white area that seems to have been pasted over the figure and not fall on it like proper cloth out, hence i'd have more shade on the side that doesn't receive more light

Also one advice that i feel is also very important, paint the whole figure first and then add the cloth, i say thie because it feels as if her right shoulder was painted by parts and not as a whole, hence it looks detached from the body and separated by the cloth, giving additional shading on the cloth would also improve it, namely underneath the arm.

Now as far as the background goes i'd just take care of the perspective, i know this is a major pain because i face the same issues.

the atmosphere looks really good and you seemed to integrate the figure very nicely in it, also, try messing with hues and give some extra touches after everything is done and experiment to see what fits best.

espero ter ajudado, como disse é a minha primeira critique e não gosto de coisas formais :XD: mas assim prontos tenho uma dada ehehehhehehehhhehheheh continua assim e exprimenta e lembra-te de dares sombras no pano todo e não só nas dobras :P
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chachaaa-8D Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010
que maminhas xD
de novo o cenario esta fantástico e a pose brutalmente bem executada :D
parabens meu amor!
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Hana-me-no-tenshi Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Student General Artist
obrigada love
:hug:
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chachaaa-8D Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2010
n agradeças q eu n fui obrigada :D

love u
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Hana-me-no-tenshi Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2010  Student General Artist
:heart:
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chachaaa-8D Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2010
:kiss:
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hell-chicken Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2010   General Artist
This is really beautiful and emotional. I like the way you shaded the whole thing, and I particularly like the green highlights on her body. Very nice. Off to check out your other work now.
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Hana-me-no-tenshi Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2010  Student General Artist
thank you! :)
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hell-chicken Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010   General Artist
You're welcome! :)
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ElisaBaroqueS Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
I like the idea in it. It really relates to your spirit right now but in a very serene and calm way.
About the painting, i love the belly. It's well structured and the colours are well applied.

I'm sorry. I've been in the same situation two times and i know how difficult it is.
If you need to talk or other thing else, just say :hug:
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Hana-me-no-tenshi Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010  Student General Artist
ty!

é bué estranho andar pela casa e não a ver, 12 anos com ela...
metade deles literalmente não tinha amigos, porque toda a gente da minha zona me via com saco de pancada(exclusões e gozo), e como esquisita, e só tinha a gata como companhia, praticamente...
tenho de a ir enterrar...
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ElisaBaroqueS Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
i know :hug:
Força.
Embora nos conheçamos relativamente a pouco tempo, já sabes, se precisares eu e o rui tamos aqui ;)
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Nati-picciui Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
wow!
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Hana-me-no-tenshi Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2010  Student General Artist
^^;
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Facenna Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
I thought you had messed up the length of the arm, so I referred to the link, and it's not you, it's the reference photo - how on earth does that arm look so short?! :confused:
You've done a really good job - but that 'short' arm really bothers me!
The face is perhaps a little long/big also?
Great work on the torso and the foreshortened leg!
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Hana-me-no-tenshi Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2010  Student General Artist
wow, thank you! as i said in the coments, there are some small things that bother me also, ill be fixing them as soon as i feel better! i think i messed the arms elbow, too.
thank you again :)
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