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Se me hace un muy buen trabajo, aunque pudiste mejorar un poquitín en el cielo, algunas estrellas por allá y otras por acullá <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="





Lo siento, no sé español, asà que tendrás que usar Google Translate para responder.
Muchas gracias por la crÃtica, no es a menudo la gente toma el tiempo para dar información detallada. SÃ, ya veo lo que quieres decir acerca de los dientes. Creo que puede estar exagerando el tamaño demasiado. La luna es en realidad una foto, debo poner un enlace a ella en la descripción.
Gracias de nuevo
Sorry, I don't know Spanish so I'll have to use Google Translate to reply.
Thanks a lot for the critique, it's not often people take the time to give me detailed feedback. Yes, I can see what you mean about the teeth. I think I may be exaggerating the size too much. The moon is actually a photo, I should put a link to it in the description.
Thanks again
Muchas gracias por la crÃtica, no es a menudo la gente toma el tiempo para dar información detallada. SÃ, ya veo lo que quieres decir acerca de los dientes. Creo que puede estar exagerando el tamaño demasiado. La luna es en realidad una foto, debo poner un enlace a ella en la descripción.
Gracias de nuevo

Sorry, I don't know Spanish so I'll have to use Google Translate to reply.
Thanks a lot for the critique, it's not often people take the time to give me detailed feedback. Yes, I can see what you mean about the teeth. I think I may be exaggerating the size too much. The moon is actually a photo, I should put a link to it in the description.
Thanks again


I can tell you 4 reasons for this if that will help you understand.
1- the styling is quite good, superior to some of your other works.
2- strong lighting effects, far stronger than any of your other works by far.
3- darker in tint so your thick black lines don't show up as much. (You'd do better to just eliminate your lines, I find they handicap the lighting effects.)
4-black or white wolves are more popular than grey or brown. But blood red wolves are the most popular by far.
1- the styling is quite good, superior to some of your other works.
2- strong lighting effects, far stronger than any of your other works by far.
3- darker in tint so your thick black lines don't show up as much. (You'd do better to just eliminate your lines, I find they handicap the lighting effects.)
4-black or white wolves are more popular than grey or brown. But blood red wolves are the most popular by far.

Ah, thanks for the input! It's not often you get helpful critique on this site.
I am actually going to try out a lineless style again, my painting's getting to the point it doesn't need them any more. I do like outlines though...
I'm wondering if the fact I did this so quickly meant I didn't overwork it, which I may be doing with my other pictures. Hence the strong lighting effect.
Red wolves? I never would have guessed.
I am actually going to try out a lineless style again, my painting's getting to the point it doesn't need them any more. I do like outlines though...
I'm wondering if the fact I did this so quickly meant I didn't overwork it, which I may be doing with my other pictures. Hence the strong lighting effect.
Red wolves? I never would have guessed.

I'm pleased to inform you that after all my moping about not having a tablet, I finally summoned the courage to purchase one online. I bought a Wacom Bamboo Manga, and it's still in the process of being delivered to my house. So expect lots of drawings from me!
(I also eagerly await your next digital masterpiece
)


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