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the negative equation...

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the error is replacing the instinctual with the logical, the reflex with the cogent flow chart. one should not remove the living flesh, employ a synthetic shroud, and expect no ill effects. embrace that which you know not you embody. celebrate the truth of fundamental existence. everything ever known is somewhere deep inside you. anything ever dreamed is just within your reach. focus outward: find distraction, focus inward: find eternity.
every story ever told contains a seed of truth. these are the similarities, the areas of oneness. coincidence and repetition are the landmarks on the journey. synchronicity; divinity's humor. learn to wait, wait and learn.

as fleshly sight fades
eternity's night gives way.
swamped by waves of light
3.11.10

full title:
the negative equation of an external merkaba

my prose and the inimitable =AlecBell's haiku

:icongloriagypsy: has allowed her image 'out of the ether' [link] to be used as a preview image for this haibun. thank you *gloriagypsy

sooo...thats a 3 way collaboration :)
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adi0's avatar
"focus outward: find distraction, focus inward: find eternity."
This is excellent, man. Great visual too. :thumbsup:
spoems's avatar
synchronicity; divinity's humor.

fills me with helium. :clap:
haijinik's avatar
is your voice all squeaky? :)
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haijinik's avatar
thank you, mam:)
rlkirkland's avatar
Ah, so you have discovered the distinquished Mr. Bell...
A good thing; an ordered mind :heart:
haijinik's avatar
mr. bell introduced me to tanka and got me writing haiku again:)
rlkirkland's avatar
He seems to find time to mentor folk.
That is very good.:)
haijinik's avatar
mentor...yes, i have applied that moniker to alec several times before:)
rlkirkland's avatar
Shh...
I've called him 'The Wizend Wizard of Words' :D
Pfft...(He's a year older than I):lol:
PrettyCrazy's avatar
Sounds like the Alec I know...
rlkirkland's avatar
Uh oh, busted. :D
PrettyCrazy's avatar
I won't tell. ^^
haijinik's avatar
hahahaha!! i will have to remember that!
haijinik's avatar
yea...i doubt anyone else reads the comments;)
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almcdermid's avatar
"ever known"

In truth, I don't really understand what the first 3 sentences are saying, though I like the rest of it.
haijinik's avatar
they are nebulous thoughts that found a bit more concrete expression in the paragraph which *rlkirkland appended in 'path to portent'. while the paragraphs were penned at the same time, i thought that each were solid enough to stand on their own:)
almcdermid's avatar
It's your art. :)
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