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acrostic haiku I

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By haijinik   |   
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poets may tend to
over-dramatize their own
emotional state
f
f
e
c
trying to capture
reality in their words:
yawn becomes  a roar.
© 2010 - 2020 haijinik
4.15.10

acrostic haiku as developed by =Mattiello

ps: this form would make a hell of a collaboration:)
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We collabed in this form!

And damn... Seems horribly fitting!
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haijinikStudent Writer
:)
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Never trust a poet. ;)
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not sure i can trust that :)
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so weird . . . and genius!

:+fav:
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thanks:) this form is fun, did you check out the tutorial?
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:) very much like it.
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yea, these are fun:) bout to post my third:)
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I'm still going over the tutorial...but they look really fun! :)
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they are:)
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Nice tie in. :)
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i thought it was fitting:)
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rlkirklandHobbyist Writer
Punny...
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i may not be british, but i can try :)
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:D
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Exactly correct! I like the piece as well. :D
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thanks:) and for the :+fav: also! maybe take a look at the forms i linked you to below?
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I definitely will! I'll do that later today!
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