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Stranger Things: Max and Eleven Tickled

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Eleven didn't really like Max. She found her presence in the group to be somewhat unjust, and she always tried to best her in everything. After all she was the one with powers not Max.

It was that day when Eleven, Max, Lucas and Mike where all over at Mike's house. It had been quite some time since the events of the summer where Eleven had successfully closed the portal to the 'upside down'.

Lucas and Mike where doing there best to show both Max and Eleven how to play some of their most complex board games bit neither of them were fully understating nor interested in them.

Just as Max made some sarcastic comments about Lucas being a nerd he began to grim widely.

LUCAS: Hey Mike you'll never guess what I found out yesterday?

MIKE: What?

LUCAS: I found Max's weakness!

Max shot Lucas a daggerd look with her eyes. He had promised not to tell anyone.

MIKE: Really? I didn't think "Mad max" would have any weaknesses!

In one final desperate attempt for her secret not to be revealed Max looked at Lucas with pleading eyes. He ignored her.

LUCAS: She's extremely ticklish. Especially on her feet. I tickled her so hard she almost exploded. It was do funny man you should have seen it.

Eleven piped up from the other side of the room.

ELEVEN: Mike. What is ticklish?

Eleven had never heard of the word. She pondered it in her head. She had learnt most words in the many months spent with the sheriff. He taught her at least one a day so she was fluent in English now. But this word was foreign to her.

Mike turned to Eleven ready to explain to her as he often had to do.

MIKE: if someone is ticklish well um it's hard to explain. Here put your feet out I'll try to show you.

Eleven did as instructed stretching her bare feet out in front of her. Mike slowly dragged one finger up her sole causing her to giggle involuntarily and pull her foot away.

ELEVEN: hahhha that was weird! It felt funny

She was shocked by the feeling. She didn't know if she liked it or not it was all so new to her.

MAX: See El is ticklish too it's not that uncommon.

LUCAS: Yeah but I bet she wouldn't go as nuts as you did if I tickled her feet!

Max got quite defensive. She hated feeling weak griwing up with her horrid brother had forced her to remain headstrong at sll times. Desperate to prove them wrong she set them a challenge.

MAX: Fine let's see then. Lucas can tickle my feet and Mike can get El. Give us both a "safeword" and whoever breaks first loses. And when i win stalkers you keep keep your mouths shut about this.

Eleven, wanting to show she was better than Max agreed almost immediately. The quartet agreed that the safeword would be "Demegorgen" before both Mike and Lucas got their victims tied up with their hands and feet tied together behind their backs. Neither girl could move as they took their place at their feet.

MIKE: You guys ready. And El no mind powers ok?

He certainly didn't want her destroying his room. Both girls agreed before the tickling began.

Eleven had never experienced anything like this. Mike's tickling fingers up her feet was sending her into bouts of heavy laughter.

ELEVEN: HAHHHA MIKKKKEHHH IHHHHT TIHHHCKLES HEHHHHAAHHGA

Mike was enjoying tickling Eleven. It was nice to see her laugh for a change even if she couldn't control it. Her feet were incredibly soft and he found himself staring at the wiggling toes.

Eleven was still deciding what to make of this feeling. She was certainly ticklish but didn't know if it was a good or bad thing.

Next to Eleven Max was losing her mind to Lucas's tickling fingers. He knew just where to stroke to make her scream the loudest. Her soles were her weakest spot and Lucas made no mistake In targeting them. He wanted her to break first finally proving she had a weakness.

MAX: HAHHA SCREHHHW YOUHHH STAHLLKER IHHHHL KIHHHHL YOUHHHH NOOHHHNOO NOHHHT THERE NOHHHT THE SOLES HAHHHHA

LUCAS: Oh you hate it here dont you max? Whose got ticklish little feet? Max does tickle tickle!

Mike was slowly learning where Eleven was most ticklish. He targeted between her unpainted toes and up the centre of her arch and heel. Eleven's laughter was beginning to get louder and he could see she was struggling not to break.

ELEVEN: OH AHHHHHHAGGHHA MIHHHKE IHHHHTS TOOOH MUCH NAHHHT THAHHHT BIHHHT HEHHHAHHHA IHHHT FEIHHHLS WEIHHHHRD MIHHHKE!

Both boys stopped briefly to talk tactics with each other.

LUCAS:: I know this sounds weird but I read somewhere that having someone lick your feet is one of the best ways to tickle someone.

Mike wasn't sure. It seemed rather weird and he knew he would not enjoy it. However wanting to test out whether it would work he reluctantly agreed.

MIKE: Fine. But this is super weird. Don't tell Will and especially Dustin, or the whole school will end up knowing we had feet in our mouths!

Both boys returned to their captives.

LUCAS: Maaax! You ready to break yet?

MAX: I could do this all night!

LUCAS: Very well. Looks like I'll have to do what I did yesterday to send you over the edge!

MAX: WAIT WAIT LUCAS NOT THAT! NO NOAHHHHT THAHHHT IHHHTS SOHHH WEIHHHHHRD HAHHHHA STAHHHP IHHHHT.

Lucas secretly enjoyed licking Mac's bound bare feet. Sure they were a little sweaty but they didn't smell bad and he enjoyed seeing her squirm as he glided his tongue up her soles.

Meanwhile Mike had reluctantly began to lick Eleven's feet as well. He started slowly not really sure what to do. Eleven giggled quietly at this slow tickling


ELEVEN: Mihhke whahht shhhre youhhh doing? IHHHS that youhhr tongue? Do tongues tihhhckle?

After initially lickng at the tops and heel of her foot he began to pick up the pace going up her sole and sucking on her toes.

ELEVEN: HAHGHA IHHHT REAHHHLY TICKLES MIGHHHKE STAHHHP IHHHJT OHGH MYYY IHHHT TIHHHCKLES

Max was losing her mind next to Eleven. She reached breaking point when Lucas sucked on her toes while tickling her sole at the same time. It was all to much she was defeated

MAX: OK OK HAHHHHA YOUHHH WIHHHN STAHHLKER DEMEHHHHA DEHHHMAHHH DEMAGIRGOHHHN STOHHHP PLEAHHHSE STOHHHP NOHH MOHHHRE.

Both Lucas and Mike stopped. Eleven was delighted she had won proving her will was stronger than Max's.

Both boys looked at eachother before looking at their helpless captives.

LUCAS: Hey Mike. They were pretty rubbish. How about we show them real tickle torture! Go get me two of Nancy's hairbrush!

MIKE: A hairbrush? Why,?

LUCAS: OH you'll see!


MAX: Wait what? SCREW YOU STALKER! Let us go NOW!"

LUCAS: Sorry girls no can do. We've got an hour till Will and Dustin get here and until then you'll have to laugh. Besides you were the ones complaining. Me and Mike were more than happy to play board games all day.

Mike returned with two hairbrush.

LUCAS: Great! Now tickle El's feet with one of these. It'll drive her nuts. It should be great fun!

Mike approached Eleven's bound feet. He was enjoying tickling her feet.

ELEVEN: Mike? Is this gonna tickle? I think I'm really ticklish Mike HAHHHA IHHHHT TIHHHCKLES MIKKKE STAHHHP HEHHHAHHHA IHHHTS TOOOH MUCH AHHHHHAHH!

Max wasn't doing any better under Lucas she thrashed and begged for mercy.

MAX: HAHHHA OHHHH MERCY LUCAS MWHHHRCY STAHHHHP IHHHHH AVHHLREADY SAIHHHD THE SAFE WOHHRD STAHHHP STAHHHP PLEAHHHSE IHH CAHHNT TAKE IHHHT!

Both girls bucked screamed and begged as they were endlessly tickled for an hour before they let them go.

Despite the begging it wasn't too bad. They didn't really hate it it was just strange for Eleven. And Max was only embarrassed that Lucas had found her weakness.

Later that day. Max and Eleven had a rare conversation.

MAX: We're deffinetly getting them back. I know when we can get Mike if you're up for it. I mean it was totally unfair and I heard he's tickish too.

Eleven was curious to see what tickling someone was like. She had thought about tickling Max but hearing her offer made her think about revenge on Mike.

ELEVEN: Ok I guess that would be fun.

The girls plotted some much deserved revenge and finally found something they could bond over. Despite their rivalry Eleven was realising that Max wasn't so bad after all .
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this needs a part two wits both Eleven and Max getting those boys back for tickling them I did enjoy the part with the licking and toe sucking makes it sou like their feet are getting worship like the queens they are

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Sure. What idea did you have?