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Utop A Rooftop

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Published: December 23, 2005
Utop a rooftop,
Across from my own,
There sits an entity,

It flies, it sees,
It walks, it paces,
It stares, it's normal.

Utop a rooftop,
Across from my own,
There sits an oddity,

It stalks, it preys,
It bites, it claws,
It spits, it's creepy!

Utop a rooftop,
Across from my own,
There sits a creature,

It jumps, it climbs,
It clings, it stares,
It breaks my glass window.

Inside my bedroom,
Across from my bed,
There sits a killer.
© 2005 - 2019 H-P-Lovecraft
ooo, this gave me chills when i wrote it, it's like a short scary story in poetic verse, and it was inspired by the rooftop ledge facing my bedroom window, although i probably won't get a restful sleep after writing this...
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dontkillthellama's avatar
ooh... nice dude... i love the last stanza... athough im not scared or creeped out... but the last stanza did get me... great job!
H-P-Lovecraft's avatar
curses, thought I had you here. O well, as long as you liked it.
dontkillthellama's avatar
your poems dont scare me...
H-P-Lovecraft's avatar
you must be tuff. I kept imagining this in my head....right next to my bedroom is a ledge just like the one depicted in this. It's creepy for me.
H-P-Lovecraft's avatar
it is, but I get my terrors out through my writings.
dontkillthellama's avatar
:) just like i get my stress, worries and depression out...
H-P-Lovecraft's avatar
writing is a good outlet, same with drawing.
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H-P-Lovecraft's avatar
interesting, eh? well, good it's not supposed to get a definite reaction, except maybe fear.
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Eh, I've never been afraid of the unknown.
H-P-Lovecraft's avatar
your a brave soul.
SillySnowFox's avatar
Not really, my fear runs towards being forgotten....
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that would give me nightmares too if i slept across from an eave oh wait i do damnit!
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heh, well, you were warned...thus is the mad writings of an insomniac.
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