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Utop a rooftop,
Across from my own,
There sits an entity,

It flies, it sees,
It walks, it paces,
It stares, it's normal.

Utop a rooftop,
Across from my own,
There sits an oddity,

It stalks, it preys,
It bites, it claws,
It spits, it's creepy!

Utop a rooftop,
Across from my own,
There sits a creature,

It jumps, it climbs,
It clings, it stares,
It breaks my glass window.

Inside my bedroom,
Across from my bed,
There sits a killer.
ooo, this gave me chills when i wrote it, it's like a short scary story in poetic verse, and it was inspired by the rooftop ledge facing my bedroom window, although i probably won't get a restful sleep after writing this...
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dontkillthellama Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2006
ooh... nice dude... i love the last stanza... athough im not scared or creeped out... but the last stanza did get me... great job!
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H-P-Lovecraft Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2006   Writer
curses, thought I had you here. O well, as long as you liked it.
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dontkillthellama Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2006
your poems dont scare me...
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H-P-Lovecraft Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2006   Writer
you must be tuff. I kept imagining this in my head....right next to my bedroom is a ledge just like the one depicted in this. It's creepy for me.
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dontkillthellama Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2006
it must be
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H-P-Lovecraft Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2006   Writer
it is, but I get my terrors out through my writings.
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dontkillthellama Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2006
:) just like i get my stress, worries and depression out...
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H-P-Lovecraft Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2006   Writer
writing is a good outlet, same with drawing.
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SillySnowFox Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2005
Interesting.
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H-P-Lovecraft Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2005   Writer
interesting, eh? well, good it's not supposed to get a definite reaction, except maybe fear.
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SillySnowFox Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2005
Eh, I've never been afraid of the unknown.
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H-P-Lovecraft Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2005   Writer
your a brave soul.
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SillySnowFox Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2005
Not really, my fear runs towards being forgotten....
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H-P-Lovecraft Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2005   Writer
ah, i see.
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lokeyswimmer Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2005
that would give me nightmares too if i slept across from an eave oh wait i do damnit!
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H-P-Lovecraft Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2005   Writer
heh, well, you were warned...thus is the mad writings of an insomniac.
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