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What is going on?
Why won't anyone tell me?
No one speaks my language,
I am ever-ignored.

Why won't they turn?
Why don't they acknowledge?
No one hears my screams,
I am ever-deafened.

Who is this who looks?
Who is this who notices?
He is dressed in black robes,
I am ever-awed.

Why does he draw so near to me?
Why does it grow so cold?
He is pressing his fingers on my neck,
I am ever-frozen.

Why does he laugh at me?
Why does he mock me?
He is trying to kill me,
I am ever-breathless.

Why is he stopping?
How come he draws back in fear?
He cannot touch me at all,
I wear the ever-constant halo.

Don't fear night monsters,
Don't fear Grim Death,
The Protector fits you with the ever-constant halo, you are safe.
A musing of mine. I guess i do alot of wondering for a simple 13 yr old child who does an abnormal amount of sleeping.....
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stacey-jayne-2005 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2005   Writer
great :+favlove:
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H-P-Lovecraft Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2005   Writer
thank you.
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M-Allcock Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2005
You're 13? :omg: You'll be a famous writer someday, kid :)
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H-P-Lovecraft Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2005   Writer
that's my hope...
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CubsEGirl Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2005   Writer
Whoa.... that's really cool. Nicely written. I like how in your poems you use nice vocab and word choice. Something I need to work on...
But your poems are really deep and thoughtful and I can tell that your improving after reading them. Keep it up I guess.
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freez3l Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2005   Writer
Halo? No, I don't carry one of those. I do, however, have a flashlight and a will.
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twisted-soul Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2005
you have good poems.
i'm going to refer you to my cousins. she loves to write and knows a bit more about poems than i...
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H-P-Lovecraft Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2005   Writer
hehe, thanks that would be nice, thank you.
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twisted-soul Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2005
you're welcome :)
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SillySnowFox Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2005
This is really good. Nice images, I can almost feel the cill.
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Lord-Fox Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2005
lol, you coulda made that a pun then. a musing - ammusing :D
unless it was?
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H-P-Lovecraft Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2005   Writer
I never intended it to be, but i noticed it and hoped no one would notice.
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Lord-Fox Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2005
well i did :P
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H-P-Lovecraft Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2005   Writer
its ok, i'm sure others will too....
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Lord-Fox Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2005
considering i pointed it out :P
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H-P-Lovecraft Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2005   Writer
yea, i suppose so....
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Lord-Fox Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2005
wow, i like this alot!
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H-P-Lovecraft Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2005   Writer
thank you, my musings often get me somewhere....heck, thats what "After the Rain" was at first, just a musing....
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