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If the rain is beating so hard,
And you can hardly hear your own thoughts,
Don't forget me,
Please remember.

If you find yourself out in the cold,
Because your family thinks your not old
Enough to be
With your own Family,
Don't forget me,
Please remember.

If the baby is soon on the way,
And your worried about the future,
Don't forget me,
Please remember.

If the situations growing dim,
And you just can't turn back to Him,
Don't forget me,
Please remember.
~AbsinthChaos has a very interesting situation going on...I was inspired by it to write this poem.
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SillySnowFox Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2005
Cool, I like.
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Faerietopia Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2005  Professional General Artist
very supportive indeed
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H-P-Lovecraft Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2005   Writer
I just submitted this a few mins ago, didn't know i was so popular :^_^':
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Faerietopia Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2005  Professional General Artist
Well, the loggin name helps :P :D
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H-P-Lovecraft Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2005   Writer
yay devWATCH!
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myfakesmile Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2005
hahaha he got you!!!interesting poem aaron...
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H-P-Lovecraft Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2005   Writer
Dammit katy, your not supposed to be reading my poetry...only people i don't see can read it...
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myfakesmile Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2005
n e ways....
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Sporenza Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2005   Writer
Curious...just wondering, was the title your own or was it an allusion to Don't Forget Me by the Red Hot Chili Peppers?
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H-P-Lovecraft Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2005   Writer
never heard that one...dammit, now i have to change the title :nirvana:
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Sporenza Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2005   Writer
No, not the title sorry. Just the don't forget me part. Hey, allusions are cool!
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H-P-Lovecraft Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2005   Writer
nah, its ok, its already changed.
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FenrirsFollower Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2005
lol but please remember is a song title by leann rimes.. :O... but then again if every title had to be unique we'd end up with: oiawhdgfiohawg no.1 :P anyways nice poem and as always a :+fav: from here :)

FF.
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H-P-Lovecraft Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2005   Writer
stupid dA message system didn't alert me to your comment, Fenrir. anyway....I'm not changing it again...It's fine the way it is. Thanks for the add guys, i'll be writing more soon.
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