If the shadows proclaim,
They draw back in fear,
What could make them do so?
If the sun would bow,
It dims its own shine,
What would make it do so?
If the moon would cease,
It reflects no more,
What should make it do so?
If my heart explodes,
If it can no longer beat,
What could make it do so?
Only the sun could stop the shadows,
Only the moon reflects the sun,
And only my heart swoons for the moon,
To ponder on a late night, about the feeling that is love.
this is not about shadows...*sigh* just read it.
it is something to be admired
this is an excellent piece. very emotive and realistic. +fav for you!
I bet I might want to add this one to my as well.
You have more love poems than me, which is none. Unless you count anti-love, which I'm working on...and maybe a few...I'm not sure. But this flows really well.