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If the shadows proclaim,
They draw back in fear,
What could make them do so?

If the sun would bow,
It dims its own shine,
What would make it do so?

If the moon would cease,
It reflects no more,
What should make it do so?

If my heart explodes,
If it can no longer beat,
What could make it do so?

Only the sun could stop the shadows,
Only the moon reflects the sun,
And only my heart swoons for the moon,
To ponder on a late night, about the feeling that is love.
this is not about shadows...*sigh* just read it.
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lokeyswimmer Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2005
it is something to be admired
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H-P-Lovecraft Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2005   Writer
admired? well thats saying something. thank you.
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Lord-Fox Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2005
this is an excellent piece. very emotive and realistic. +fav for you!
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H-P-Lovecraft Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2005   Writer
why thank you.
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Faerietopia Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2005  Professional General Artist
I bet I might want to add this one to my :+fav: as well.
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H-P-Lovecraft Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2005   Writer
thank you for the fav.
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Sporenza Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2005   Writer
You have more love poems than me, which is none. Unless you count anti-love, which I'm working on...and maybe a few...I'm not sure. But this flows really well.
Good job.
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H-P-Lovecraft Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2005   Writer
thank you.
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