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Welcome to Atro City,
Though a welcome you won't recieve,
We hate you here, like everywhere,
Through bounds you can't conceive.

Once was a place loved by all,
But no one cares anymore,
I don't care if you stay or leave,
Because no one needs you anymore.

Do you feel lost?
Our help is to be disbanded,
We don't care if you never find away,
We really hope your stranded.

Need some help?
Well you won't get it,
This is Atro City,
When no one helps or cares at all, its an atrocity.
yes, this is a new poem from new inspirations mentioned in my journal....and no, i'm not ripping it off from the System of a Down song, i thought of it before i heard that song...
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H-P-Lovecraft Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2005   Writer
Thank you all, I am amazed that my poetry became a big hit so quickly.
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lokeyswimmer Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2005
this may sound simple but i love the play-on-words (though i guess thats half the point of poetry, the other half being the message) and youve used both and made an exellent poem
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SillySnowFox Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2005
Amazing.
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Sporenza Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2005   Writer
Again, for someone so young, your poetry is so amazing. I can't wait till your a few years older, and have developed further along as an individual and find your own ways of using poetry. TO THE FUTURE!
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Faerietopia Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2005  Professional General Artist
Heh, dunno why it reminds me of my former job.
It's well put and all. I like the style.
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